lol. Typical pillow fight at the end. :)

Lovely :)

i was half expecting a very different ending by what you've hinted in the story... but the fluffy ending is still amazing.

bravo on this piece. very well done.

That was great fun, despite the style being a bit unpolished. Was that...a Ghostbusters e-cameo? Good contributions from...everybody but Sam. Couldn't she have done something to Shadow while he was treating her like the damsel?

I spent the whole last scene preoccupied with whether Danny still had a wastebasket full of vomit in his lap, and if not where it was, how likely it was to get knocked over by all the activity around the bed, and how badly the room must be stinking while they were having these heartwarming interactions. x.x Have cleaned up after vomiting way too many times to let it just evaporate out of the scene once introduced. You tweaked my sense-memory there.

I must say, I regret not coming across your work sooner. Though in my defense, it appears that most of it was written before I became a regular visitor to FF.

Ah. A boy and his other selves. Why am I not creeped out?

This is just such a good story. It really is.

Wow. This was a great story! You obviously put a lot of thought and research into it as you were writing. The ideas and theories were sophistocated and informative, but they weren't overwhelming like they often are when plugged into a story. The plot was very well developed and was paced just right: not too rushed, but it didn't ever drag. Bravo. And you did a great job of writing the characters and keeping them in character. It must have been hard to keep the Dannys Danny, but distict, but you pulled it off!

You are a very good, polished writer, and I love the little witty details you include in your narration; it makes everything just that much better to read. A really great story-thanks!

Sapphireswimming

Okay, now I get the Shadow references from 'Outside Looking In'. And, once again, great fic. I now know that it wasn't a fluke - you're actually a good writer. You'd be surprised how many people out there manage to write one good story and then a whole bunch garbage, so I had to check. You seem to be particularly good at psychoanalysing, but that might be just because you like it, or because I've only read two of your fics. Either way, you're still good at it.

this... is SO worth staying up late on a weeknight. -

awesome *favs*,

brittney

O_O i love the lenghth! it must have took you forever to make it up to this highest caliber work. Squishing it all into one chapter helps really see the full length, which made me take a double take.

the thing i liked most about it was that you didn't rush the plot line! As in not pushing 'on the fly ideas' in at the last second with no build up into the event. It also reads easy and fluently, the whole '3 Dannys' thing made me think deeply of how you interpreted the series (and make me wish i thought of that XD)

anyways! i love the depth of the story, and i am looking forward to more deep thoughts.

Cool story! Thanks!

Great story. It's amusing to see how this story overlaps the one with the psychiatrist helping everyone. Keep writing.

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BUNNY

...Bravo.

I enjoyed it whole-heartedly, as I try to find stories with psychological views(like a guilty pleasure)