OMG! (Wow that sounded stupid!) Why do you people ALWAYS do this to me?

i like the story line, but i do think you rush a lot, try to slow down your ideas and let them flow, don't be in a hurry. if this is just your style then i am sorry. i am just trying to help. after all that is the point of reviewing is it not. the all the chapters but the last two, where a little bit lacking more detail. but i see you got better at that. the last two chapter where really good. the whole story is good. i just think you need a bit more practice. but you are a good writer. better then me. later dude

Cool bike. Even cooler chapter :)

update soon

hey! yet another AWESOME chapter! i hope u update soon! -

whoa...weird...but interesting! :]

anyway...AWESOME job! i hope u update soon! -

Creepy.

Grool. Not. Good. At. All.

So...will you be updating soon then?

Great chapter!

Sounds like a ghosties on the way...

OH MY GOD THIS WAS SO FUNNY PLEASE CONTENU AS SOON AS POSABLE!

Good!

[This is Holly by the way. )]

"Ah, the old sister trick. . .When will they realize that's just me in a dress?" -Mr. Lancer

OMG, He's a cross dresser! I knew it. . . *shifty eyes* Awesome fic :)

Vladysgirl

so it's Lancers sister? ew! but that was him in a dress!

Ah, creepy teacher! Yay for an update! When's the preview at the bottom of Chapter 2 going to come up? Next chapter maybe? Update soon! (Or at least faster than your last update :P )

Lol.

That's hilarious!

UPDATE SOON!

Wow...they believed him!

Onward...