I love this story, absolutely great! Please finish it! (also, where is the half naked Warren we were promised? XD )

Love it!

please update

Hey this is a great story. I think you should continue. Please update soon. I really like this story.

Great story so far! Any chance of an update?

Update please?

I like this story. It's really, uh..riveting. Is that the word? It's a good fic. Will keep reading. Please update soon. :)

Pretty powerful incentive, maybe I should try it ;)

I really like what you're doing with Warren. When will there be more of this?

Plz update soon!

Please update, I am dying to find out what happens next!

You're kidding right? I just found this story and its so good and you haven't updated it in SO long?!?!?!?

You've gotta give me something here. I'm dying to know how this story ends.

::POKES AUTHOR:: Umm... you are still alive arent you? You might think that I'm asking that kiddingly but I'm not. You still around? If you are please more fic.

hehe. i find it amusing that when all you wanted was to hit the 200 mark for this chapter, when i'm reviewing i'll bump it up to 256. it's amazing what people'll do for a little sweaty warren!chest, isn't it?

*coughs nervously* not like i'm one of them or anything . . . . anywho! i have to say that i absolutely love you story, and i'm off to read 'Layla', once I put in this review. So hurry up and update!

I will have you know!
Not only has it been two years..;-;

But! You promised a shirtless AND glistening Warren Peace if you reached 200! Its 254!
Now maybe i'll give up on a story..but not a deal like that!

You get your tooshy moving or else!!
;)
-Tinuel

The previous chapter, Chapter 11, was done amazingly. I was confused on why someone Warren's age would be in there. Money, I get it. Then I was confused on why Warren's mother even lets him. She came off as such a loving, gentle mother..I wonder why she'd be okay with people hitting and kicking the crap out of her boy.
But description was amazing. Every action was detailed vividly, and I couldn't of felt more in touch with that scene :)

This chapter: Not too much going on, but it ends up with a tiny bit. I'd be embarrassed, too, if I were Margaret. Her friends don't seem to know when to drop it. Or even suggest other guys!
Warren's silent throughout the debate was suitable.

The end felt a bit out of place, but emotions well met. In the end of her little mumbling, i'm wondering if Warren notices what I have. She knows nothing of our pyrokinetic except what she has SEEN. Emotion wise, she must still be in the dark. And personally, I think thats logical. Not like her and Peace have ever had much of a heart-to-heart.
I HOPE to see a future one! Like in the detention room, perhaps ;)

Its been a small wait since you're last update, and I dearly hope you continue :)
I really am loving this.
Soon as you update, i'd be thrilled to toss this into my Favorites. But just in case you've given up for now..I wont :-p

I don't like favoriting things that may not continue.

So hurry up, and feed this story-hungry reader!
~Tinuel