So, I read this story a *long* time ago. I really enjoyed it, though I was obviously disappointed that I couldn't finish it. I've been checking back periodically, but I must admit I never got around to checking your profile. LOL. 45 incomplete stories! It looks a bit like the list of stories on my hard-drive :). Anyway, I figure that this story's probably dead, which is a shame, but hey, I understand what it's like to lose inspiration. Thanks anyway for what you did write. It was very entertaining and pretty much the best Devilman Lady fic I've had the pleasure of reading. Thanks again :).

i luv how jun tossed the tape and smashed it against the wall
kazumi just learn something about Jun...she may look timid and lack strength but she's actually pretty strong...
i don't know about forcing kazumi out...b/c now kazumi will be out of her watch and it could be a bad thing.

OMG, is this going to be the moment.
Jun is going to see the tape?!

Asuka really knows how to provoke Jun.
“If all I had to do was bring your little pet into this to get you to start acting like a proper Devilman, then I should have done it sooner.”
"Stay away from her."

Well, love has a weakness and a strength. Asuka must know misjudge that. Asuka knew that Kazumi was the reason why Jun is still very much human-like :D

i really like how you capture their character, right on!
the feeling of guilt and responsibility Jun has toward Kazumi may be more than just that :P

i'll say, Asuka is very much insterested in Jun, but that's just the way she is and how she expressed her jealousy, by provoking Jun...luv how protected she was toward kazumi...
I guess Asuka didn't like the fact that Jun is pretty much attached to her human side because of Kazumi and want to ruin their lovely time together...

kazumi is being sweet...she has good reasoning..
i mean, how would you feel if the other person is taking care of all the expenses.
thanks to kazumi, a very dear person, who keeps Jun's human heart in place...someone there by her side giving her warmth, the very feeling other fail to give to her...
i luv it!

now this is a better clarification that i would accept of why kazumi said "am i just a stranger to you?"
i guess that must really hurt jun...trying to protect kazumi even thought it hurt her because she couldn't say anything about her other life to the younger school girl, afraid it will bring harm to her.
i like this couple :D

i look at the date and it has been over a year since you've last updated.
i watch the anime and really like Jun's character, although quiet and timid, she cares much about kazumi...plus what make me like her more was her voice :D

this is a very good summary of the episode that has this unfortunate even occured.
i don't know if you are still around, but i hope you gain some motivation to write this...maybe watching the anime again...
will i have any hope of future update> :D

Wow! This is one heck of a story. I am realy enjoying it. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update as soon as possible.

I don't really like to critique anyone's work. I just watched all of the Devilman Lady series and..I enjoy it very much!! I found the energy with Kazumi, Jun and Asuka is great, which is why I like this fanfic. I hope the author reading my comment because I really enjoy this story. It has great potential and would be awesome if it was completed.

Nice story. I like the emotional turmoil coming off of Jun and Kazumi. I hope to see another chapter soon. Hit me back.
Tuume.
P.S. I saw the completed version on Shoujo

i managed to look the 17 first episodes of the serie. strange that with that much yuri in it, no more people know or write about it.
i like big stories and i understand completly that they take time but letting us with this cliff is evil.
thank you for writring a kazumi/jun fic. they're hard to find.

Asuka is so going to light into Jun.

C'est trés biens, mais c'est quand la suite.