Is Mathias involved in this story? I like it because it has a different plot than most I've found. Update please.

Great story so far I hope for an update soon

xD when will you continue it? ) I love Joa-sama xD well... by the side of Leon? I don't know... anyway, great story! :P

Wow, thats really good. I'm looking for some really good updates! Yaay! Can' wait 'till the next chappie!

Hmm... I really like this _ update soon, please

Ooh, the meeting of Joachim and Leon. *Watches with glee*

- Very well writen, thats what I like in a fanficcy.

Update soon!:D

cool chapter. update soon okay.

Awesome update... I guess that's Joachim's idea of a fun little game XD. I love it! Update soon!

Let me start by saying you have wonderful taste. I beleive you have a beautiful understanding of what could be between them. I'll be watching for updates.

Many thanks for the cookies! And strangely, happy trances and wall-bouncing seem to be popular review-reactions...

A good chapter; I always like well-written dialogue. Although original characters usually bug the crap outta me, Flame seems oddly fitting. Good job with that, and update soon!

This is a beautiful story! You have a way with the language that is both compelling and easy to follow. I think I find myself becoming more of a LeonxJoachim fan every day... ehem, update soon!

I hope you go further into this. I'm enjoying it and hope you continue soon.

this story is amazing I hope that you continue soon I want to see what happens next.