Short, but immensely touching. The last phrase really struct something.

oh my gosh, that is so sad. i nearly cried, and nothing makes me cry, ever! i love it and its amazing.

poor kio

T_T How sad! poor Kio! but I love Ritsuka even though through half the anime he was confussed!

Yum, delicious ficlet. Lovely metaphors all around, and that little jab at interminable change that just keeps pressing on was wonderful. Reminds me a bit of Rebecca by DuMaurier for some reason.

Hm, any chance for more?

Aw

Poor Kio.

Good fic!

even though it's about a lollipop...it's still sad (T_T: Niki...your don't get the point at all) That poor lillipop!

I don't know why, but I really love this story. It just gets to me, I can really empathize with it I imagine.

... This is officially the first Loveless fiction I have read. (has just seen the first four episodes) And I... am so... ENTHRALLED! Oh, Kio! Oh, Soubi! Love and loss and pretty things!

Erm... Sorry. In case you didn't catch it:

"This fiction is great at capturing the one sided romance between Soubi and Kio. I enjoy reading your work! I can't wait to read that Loveless story you have in the works. Well, don't give up! Eventually, you'll get through that huge pile of fiction! (You should see mine. ;;)

Aw.

*Cuddles Kio*

*sweatdrops* i thought that when i read the upper part of your story that you were lying in your summery. But in the end you didn't * continues sweatdropping* cool story by the way

"After all, it wasn't the first time something of his had broken because of Soubi."

Only one sound can sum it up: Aw.