Rose 7 - that was amazing. I don't have much in the way of constructive crits, as it's only a single scene, but what I read was one of the best /written/ stories yet. Really - great job!

Heartbreaking stuff. It was beautifully written.

That was an amazing peice of writing...it makes me want to cry. So sad...

Oh my goodness... I had to go reread your promise at hte beginning that this doesn't "predict" anything for Lost and Found. Beautifully written, but so sad...

This was really sad, but wrote really well.