Reviews for Project Breakdown

Reviews For: Project Breakdown

Temari-senpai 2008-02-06 ch 2,	abuseare you writing the plot of the game out? if so i could really use it... my dad wants to know the plot and such before he will buy it for me... i may be the age i am but i am still in school and the old man buys me the stuff i want... usually
swack16 2007-10-13 ch 2,	abuseOh man this game is one of my favorites please update soon
Osirus Revan 2006-04-25 ch 2,	abuseIt almost like playing the game, Although it was getting started I hope you get to finsh the rest of the story, I liked it! It's on the favorite stories list.
Bakalakadakaman 2005-12-08 ch 2,	abuseI remember first reading about breakdown and saying "one day I will have that game " and I have it now! for about 2 years now. the swarmer bugs still freak the hell out of me. I'm at the end of the game right now. But if you can tell what happens after the game ends for a chapter that would be awesome!:)
Kerv-ball 2005-11-17 ch 2, anon.	abuseThanx! About time someone submitted a fnfic of this great, underexposed game. Can't wait for the next chapters.
Rialb 2005-09-24 ch 2,	abuseIm a huge fan of the game, i was surprised to see any fanfic for it. Great fanfic so far, please keep up the good work! -Rialb
AidanPryde001 2005-09-04 ch 2,	abuseHI! Nice start! I assume that you've finished the game? I really like the story, and it was sort of challenging. But anyway, keep it up. Don't want to see this one fizzle or die. I liked!
Afro-Rican 2005-08-30 ch 2,	abuseHoly crap I can't believe somebody made a Breakdown fic I thought that game was kick good man. Hmm maybe I'll make my own haha
priest not of the cloth 2005-08-23 ch 2,	abuseYes, finaly someone creates a fanfiction for this amazing game (honestly, i believe one of the most original, well done, and most intriguing games every). i can honestly say i am looking forward to updates more than you know. also, now that i finaly have the time to write, i was thinking about giving a shot at breakdown, but since for a while it had no catagory and was a relatively unknown game, i figured it would either never get it's own catagory, or simply be ignored. what i'm getting at is that since i finally have the time, i plan to write for breakdown and wondered if you would like to colaberate (don't worry, i don't write my stories as poorly as i do my reviews, i'm just a lazy reviewr).
Xerro 2005-08-15 ch 2, anon.	abuseheh cool, i only just played through the game myself, and it's gd 2 see ur sticking to how the game went pulling the speech from the game. i look forward 2 reading the rest of this story as u write it.
Silvermoonlight GJ 2005-08-11 ch 2,	abuseAnother great chapter. I like the use of detail it draws the reader in. I also like that the poor guy really doesn't know what’s going on. The only thing I'd tweak is the Explosion. Via making the scene deeper and stronger and having bits fly over where and glasses fall over. Other than it it's a great second chapter :) I'm looking forward to your next update.
Silvermoonlight GJ 2005-08-02 ch 1,	abuseI love the start of this, its really interesting in that you don't know what's going on. The small things going on really draw you in, like the light and the voices. Poor guy suffering from memory loss, I think that's a really great start. Please continue :)

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