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I liked it.

good fic, I'll go read the squal. i started reading this a few hours eailer, lst, but just like runescape I came cralwing back for more...at one in the morning. Man i need sleep, but I can. Yaoi...goodness... can't stop...reading...

Cool.

Hey, I was just browsing and your story stuck out because... erm... I don't want to be a jerk, but you spelled "Pieces" wrong. And since it's the title, well, y'know, you might want to correct it. (I before E, except after C, or as in "eh," like neighbor and weigh. And in the word "weird.")

(shifty eyes) Huh? I dun understand! I'M SO CONFUSED!! AH!! (runs away)

UPDATE SOON!!

i --heart- u!@^_^@ great job. you're on my favorites, so u should be proud! i read you're other story, you're latest J X M fanfic. and if you read the reviews, you'll see mine. i hope you read mine when it comes out 1-2 weeks from now. oh and thanx for writing these stories!

Yeah, it is kind of sappy but..S.K? Bwhahahahahah! So FUNNY! THe S.K! THanks for that! Also, I absolutely LOVED your analogy of Jin and Mugen as pieces of flint (the title of your story is misspelled, by the way- might want to correct that)Anyway, maybe in future M x J fanfics you could explain WHY J x M happen. I mean, I DEFINITELY see it, but I can't figure out how it would happen.
(P.S. Hate any Fuu pairings; I appreciate this fanfic)

Good story, I liked it. There realy isn't plenty of JinxMugen.

Ooh, that was cool! I don' think you should make this a oneshot. Yoo should, like, make this whole scene where Jin and Mugen are about to kill eacother, but they can't because they love eachother too much! Ha, that'll make me laugh. Well anyway, I really don't think you should make this a oneshot, it's really cool!

;.; so... /sniff/ ... cute.

That was cool. I thought the last lines were a little sappy, but it was good otherwise. You have "She holds two stones in her hand" instead of held.

Hee!! I lurved it! It was to cute...I loved how well you did the comparison between Mugen, Jin, and the flint. Suits the title obviously O_o; anyways! Keep writing, I loved it.