Reviews for Elemental Hearts: InsideOutside

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Loveless727 2008-07-07 ch 11,	abuseACK! I'm so confussed! But I know that isn't the real Kouichi. He isn't saying Riku - kun and is much more laid back than the actuall one from the story.
Wakaran a i xx 2008-07-06 ch 11,	abuseIt was nice to see what Riku and Kouichi were up to ^^ The only thing I have to say is that there were times in the earlier chapters when Kouichi wasn't using '-san' or -'kun', which kinda messed with its delibrate lack of use in the last two chapters.
WindStar 2008-01-19 ch 10,	abuseI really hope you update this soon, it's very exciting.
Just a reader 2008-01-10 ch 11, anon.	abuseI know, late review to this chapter and everything, but I just reread it after reading the newest chapter of Elemental Hearts. Normally I don't leave reviews, mainly because I'll just repeat the same things others have said. Your story IS great, and I can't wait to read more, update soon please, etc. All of that is true. Just two little things that I guess your beta missed: 1) Riku saying Christ - there's very little religion in KH; they have Christmas, so I'll accept that they DO have Christianity, but considering none of them say 'Christ' or 'God' in the game, that threw me out of the story and seemed OOC. This, of course, is completely subjective, and I'm just pointing it out so that you'll be aware of it, I'm not really asking you to go through and take it out or anything. If you were already aware of this and it was conscious on your part, great! Completely disregard this. 2) Maleficent, not Melficent. Since you've spelled the name right before, I assume that you and your beta just missed this.
Neko-Zordaray 2008-01-05 ch 6,	abuse...The one-hundreth review... First I would like to say this is probably my favorit chapter in the story but I would also like to say that I am waiting with baited breath for the next exciting chapter. I love the little hints flying about and the way Riku is able to tell somthing is off with Kouichi even though he's not acting too different. You managed to really set the stage for a great romance if you wanted too (please do I wanna see Kouji's reaction to it all) but more then that you've pulled off the personalities wonderfuly and created an amazing adventure with my favorite dark children. I complement you and encourage you, Please write more soon. With love and admiration, Neko-Z
Leshyaedawnfire 2007-11-28 ch 11,	abuseHow'd the screen break and why does your laptop have a name, let alone a gender?
chi chan24 2007-11-26 ch 1,	abuseI reaLLy want to know what happens next!
Syaoran-Lover 2007-09-23 ch 11,	abuseI knew it was strange when I gt the alert for this... o.O It's almost sad to know Riku yearned for that touch at one point then repels it later... >.< ARGH! Give us the real Kouichi back! I want him back with Kouji, or at least Riku... ^^ Good luck with Donnie! XP
Rael-Lirdu 2007-09-08 ch 11,	abuseHey! What's up? You finally updated it! I guess prodding really does help... So Beryl's spell is doing something to the Items, is it? I wonder why it affected the Items in the Realm of Darkness so differently than the ones in the Realm of Light. Um... is that Castle Oblivion at the end? Because that's the only castle I can think of that has a green roof and stands at the edge of Twilight. How do you like college so far? Are you adjusting well? I am, I think. I'm sorry to hear about your laptop. It'll be out of commission for three whole weeks?! That stinks. If you want to talk about anything, just PM me. (Oh, and I'm working on the second chapter of DigiGhost as much as I can, so expect to get the new chapter from me pretty soon, I hope.) Update KoEH and I/O again soon!
TenshiGosuperu 2007-07-20 ch 10,	abuseriku/kouichi is adorable! update soon!
Raefele 2007-06-19 ch 10,	abuseAck, PLEASE UPDATE THIS! You're amazing brain (once again) has come up with an amazing story! Go RikuxKouichi XDXDXD
WolfDemonRika 2007-06-09 ch 10,	abuseI repeat what I said on your other story. And I just wanted to tell you This pairing is so cute ^^
Shaveza 2007-06-01 ch 10,	abuseOh...well, crap. stares blankly at Kouichi That's not really Kouichi...Kouichi uses honorifics. What's this called...dramatic irony, I think? Riku and Kouichi...ponders. They -would- be cute together. grins They can blame the purple paopu fruit if they want. The way King Mickey set Kouichi hovering over Riku like a mother hen in a previous chapter was adorable.
LaZella 2007-04-23 ch 10,	abuseThis will be a good ending for Kouichi right? The creep won't take over his body and ruin everything. I bet that Kouichi dug up some special power and blasted the creep away right? I want to know!
lukomouse 2007-04-01 ch 10,	abuseoh so this is where kouichi went :D

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