*smiles*

-Kimly

I'm not a big poem person, but I LOVED the last line! I'm going to quote you!

LOVED IT!

Towards the center the rhyme scheme faulters a bit, and "If one was not ‘pure’, one could not be exchanged/By a matchmaker into a horrible life" doesn't flow like the rest, I think it's the rhythm of the second sentence, using two unstressed syllables in a row throws things off a bit, and since the sentence is so small it's hard for it to catch up.

Anywho, looks like you put a lot of thought into it, and I loved the insight into just WHY Andromeda took off. Truly Lovely.

+Fav

Will there be more?