 Aino Ailill 2009-11-08 . chapter 25The Marauders made an immensely complicated map in order to aid in there mischief, as well as devoted themselves to advanced study far beyond what the average wizard (or witch) does in order to become animagi. That is not indicative that they were only opportunistic and spontaneous pranksters, although they seem to have indulged in such as well. |
 Vacilica Malfoy 2009-10-30 . chapter 46I love this story! This is the third time I've read it, so I thought I should finally get off my lazy arse and review.
Seriously, you write very well, I just read it all in one go, it just reads so smoothly and effortlessly. The fact that I haven't noticed any spelling errors also makes for an enjoyable read.
I also like that you give us insights into minor characters, I can't wait for Hermione to join the others, and your characterizations of Vincent and Argus are great. I don't think I've ever read a story where ALL the characters are developped in such detail.
Argus doubting Sirius innocence was brilliant, I wish things would get better for Sirius soon, please he doesn't deserve to suffer so much! Please?
I like your Remus too. He's not one of my favourite characters in canon, I find him too passive whith a tendency towards self-pity, but him actively getting involved with potitics is great, although he might want to think about the fact that a suspect not getting a trial is just as unjust as a werewolf being denied human rights.
Anyway, this is a great story, wish you could update more often, but I totally understand that you have a life outside fanfiction. |
 Starshinesoldier 2009-10-10 . chapter 46Oh what a tangled web you weave. I especially love the sub story about Draco and Vincent growing attached to Molly. :3 |
 GoldenRat 2009-10-06 . chapter 46This is such an interesting AU. Really enjoying how you've ever so slightly changed canon. |
 tribebohemian 2009-10-06 . chapter 46great two chapters! exciting and adrenaline pumping. i was pleased to see lupin lose his cool and speak up for himself but terrified of the twins secret getting out. and snape! oh severus, you wound me sir. i hated seeing that he was behind it all but it fits his character and his hatred of remus. but for him to risk hurting minerva in the process? for shame severus. awesome update as usual and sorry i didn't review sooner. keep up the good work. :) |
 Hebi R. 2009-10-01 . chapter 46Snape is just too stubborn to live. Erg!
Which "you" can the other werewolf not believe the daring of, Remus or the despised one?
Er, sorry for the odd sentance structure.
I do not know how this could be arranged, but I wonder what would happen if Remus spent a full moon with the twins. As an Animagus, Minerva could still supervise, and I am curious as to how a "normal" adult werewolf would react to the "yay lets go change into 'wolves" twins.
I also wonder how the twins as werewolves might react to a human encounter. While Poppy never actually got too close when she observed, the twins did not appear to be bothered by a human in the room that they must have been able to see, smell, and hear. On the other hand, it is possible that, like wolf cubs, young werewolves are less agressive than older ones.
And once they enter their teen years, I hope they do not have to deal with "inner alphas fighting for dominence" or anything like that. |
 linistita 2009-09-24 . chapter 46Wonderful chapter. I love the story, especially the twists you have added with draco, vincent, percy, Argus, and lupin |
 Erroneously 2009-09-23 . chapter 46I really enjoyed this chapter, but I'm worried for Remus after the time jump - was he in prison for 6 years? |
 Namiko-kii 2009-09-23 . chapter 46Oh, another excellent chapter.
I get your comments about Kristen and Saleem. It's just they're so awesome to see together. Okay, though, on to this chapter. I would have liked to see McGonagle's original reaction - but the reporter conference was very good. Loved the comment about Antartica. They show up here in Australia so who knows, they might go there too.
Severus's anger - great characterisation, not to mention an interesting snippet.
Yay! Remus is back. It'll be really good to see the rest of this happen, although the transition from arrest to freedom was a bit unclear. You went from hoping about the results of the test (Lydia) to disappointment about what actually occured (Severus). A bit more filling in between these would have worked a bit better, in my opinion, but that's not really a major issue. |
 Sati James 2009-09-23 . chapter 46liking this story alot. Please update soon :D |
 HerGoldenWings 2009-09-23 . chapter 46O.o when was the last time Remus saw them?
Loved it,
maybe you should add alittle summary at the start of chapters though,
xx |
 Paganimagus 2009-09-22 . chapter 46another great chapter!
Glad to have Lupin back :D
Also, I just noticed exactly how much your tone changes a bit for each character. I quite like it |
 Shaggy37 2009-09-22 . chapter 46Outstanding chapter! I still hope Lydia decides to savage the Browns! Would serve them all right if they were turned into the very thing they hate! Wonder if they know that they're no better then death eaters for their viewpoints about werewolves? Will the twins have any kind of romantic relationships later on in there lives? If so will they eventually have kids? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!:):):):) |
 Eryn 2009-09-22 . chapter 46 Torture that bastard Snape please... O... I hate him so much! Please say you have something nasty for stupid severus snape!
Nice chappie, by the way. Keep it up! |
 PadyandMoony 2009-09-22 . chapter 46Poor Snape, he will have to endure the indigestion. He, he.
I loved the chapter, but I didn't understand why Lupin was arrested at first.
Thanks for your response too. I'm glad I'm forgiven! |