B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.

That's is really all I can say is that it was BEAUTIFUL!

~Anna Christie~

it is good
keep working on these
you are getting better

it good to

I liked it but there was a place or to in it where you could have worded it a litle better. Like the name of the school you should have wrote in the words school so people would know you were talking about a school.
and where you said she could no longer deny
deny what spell it out a little more in detail
Ok over all I did like the story

Yes, it's finally me.
OH my God, Oh my God, Oh my GOD!
I love it, such a beautiful ending.
(Stupid me- almost thought Derrick was getting married for a minute. Duh, that wouldn't fit now would it.)
OK, now where's my next story!?!

that was amazing. r u sure that was ur FIRST? it was written almost like a novel. beautifully...no wonder u have more than 120 reviews...

I can only think of one word to sum up this chapter: Beautiful. And it was, Jmac. Endindg this story with a wedding is really the only fitting way you could have ended it. I'm sad to see that this story is over. In some ways (if it's not too selfish or arrogant of me to say) I feel that this is partly my story as well. Has it really been a year? Gosh, it seems so much longer. I don't know what I would do without you in my life. Even though we haven't ever met, I feel as if I know you better than I know myself. Don't ever forget, Jmac, that you are a brilliant and beautiful young woman. No matter what life throws at you, know that you can handle it. I've seen you overcome some tremendious obstacles in the small amount of time that we've known each other. And each victory only makes you stronger. This story is a testament to that. You came into writing thinking that you wouldn't be able to do it. And now look at what you've done. It's so amazing. I love you so much. Half-heart, Butterfly

Ooh, I can't wait to read the next one. Jmac, that chapter was so brilliant. I loved it, I absolutely loved it! There were a few grammatical errors that I saw, but that was like the only thing that I found wrong with this chapter. I'm so proud of you! Alright, well I'm off to read the last chapter.

SHE COMMITED SUICIDE! NO! lol j/k

It was awesomeness. You know I suck at reviews though. XP

~*Kris*~

i felt the chapters were too short, but otherwise it was a pretty good story.

if you like this type of fan fic, feel free to read mine. I think we both went for a marriage theme.

i think this is great still dont see how u do it keep up the good work maybe some day it will make u a wealthy girl love ya memaw

it was so sad but then happy at the same time. it was awsume i loved it alot. please update soon!

SO...Much...feeling...
*tear*
I love it. It's genius!

Omg that was so good! keep writting!

u have done a great job u are very talanted and smart remember what i tol;d u and know i love u very much