This story is genius.

Some have accused my OCs of being Mary-Sues in the past.

In truth, Zaxted (one of them) is a preppy loser who likes teasing others. The only reason I made him was to patch up countless plotholes that would have otherwise screwed things up (and because Tails needed a polar opposite and rival, much like Shadow being Sonic's).

In my second installment, his minor role is filled and he is bloodily impaled. I'm so evil. >D
Everyone, including I, agrees that he deserved it. Karma is a great thing.

This is going on my favorites list. It takes somewhat applaudable skill for that.

Congratulations.

This is great. know I remember why you are one of my favorite fan authors. I really like this break from your darker stuff (wich is excellent by the way no question there)

but this is great. the structure is realy well done. it makes me want to go and fix all my writting to get to the level you are at. good work and I will finishe the story tomarrow. I just got off work and I'm tired
-_- good night.

I'm laughing so hard their are tears in my eyes! Gah, this is hilarious! It might not be if I had some intense love for fan-characters, but I don't! So it's absolutely hilarious. And it's not like poorly written like most funny stuff. This is seriously hilarious!

I love this story! I was laughing the entire time I was reading it. The bits with Shadow were especially hilarious. Good work!

ho-le-crrap that was funny! do not stop making these!! there so great!

Oh, come on, you've GOT to continue this. It's too funny not too!

This story is very amusing. Not too silly or boring at all. Very original and well written. I love it! I hope you continue soon.

I can only imagine what will happen once Shadow is discovered by his fangirls...o.O

This story is sheer genius. I don't think I've laughed this much at a Sonniku fanfic in a long time. Brings back memories. Uh, yeah, anyway...

I poked fun at fan characters not too long before I found this, a funny coincidence. Most fancharacters just look like an edited picture of Sonic with more hair, clothes, and maybe different colored fur. And they're usually really powerful or something to make them look "cooler". A pet-peeve of mine.

But I loved this story! Best Sonic fanfic I've read in a long time. The summary caught my eye. I saw the summary and knew I wanted to read this. I love everything~! It's so hilarious!

Heh, I'm a big fangirl of Shadow-kun as well. I think I've married him in a RP or two...can't really remember. XD *has married Kisshu a few times as well*

And, of course, I have my own army of fanchara. A lot of them scare even me, now that I look back on them. I think my favorite's still December. Probably my best one. (http://i7. Least Mary-Sue-like character I've done, most likely.

Anyway, I'll be waiting for updates! ^^

I think this chapter was quite entertaining. Not for the overall plot, as I knew this was going to happen, but for the sheer comedy of the chapter. And it also seems to be deviating from the fan-fic bashing it was set out to be... Wonder if that is a good or bad thing...

All in all, quite great as usual, but the only qualms I have with this chappy is that there is not much suspense, not enough to make me await the next chapter with enthusiasm.

Very, very funny.

I like your style of writing. Poor Knuckles!

-Pink Emerald816-

Hhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. That was funny. update soon.

yay *hug* please continue!

Uh-oh...what happens next? The war against the 'sues and 'stus?

Gaah ha ha ha! Shotgun wedding; good one!! Oh, and I don't to change the subject and sound unintelligent but what does 'w00t' mean?

XD Awesome! I was thinking of writing something like this, but I knew their were already some out so I just...didn't, I guess...Oo I'll be here whenn you update, so...make sure you do that when the next chapter is done. ^^ I did happen to find some grammatical errors, such as misplaced commas, ect... but they weren't a big deal.