 Nelarun 2008-08-01 . chapter 3This was really good. I admit quite freely that you (two) would have to be the only authors who write from the POV of other characters... if you know what I mean... Great stories.
Nela |
 link55-06 2007-10-27 . chapter 3I love to read the outsiders' view on SG1. Hopefully you can continue this fic when you have the time. |
 Rebel Goddess 2006-03-08 . chapter 3Excellent. More please. I love this. |
 Ruth 2005-09-28 . chapter 3 hehe...
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 deathstreet89 2005-08-29 . chapter 3great chaps |
 lynnmichelle 2005-08-29 . chapter 3Defintely giggle worthy :-) |
 myeerah 2005-08-29 . chapter 3Delightful. :) |
 smalldiver 2005-08-29 . chapter 3"Aliens got my gun Sir" - best. Excuse. Ever! |
 MuseUrania 2005-08-28 . chapter 3 Another great chapter! I just love this line ->"I hear they're testing it as a new secret weapon for dissolving the hulls of alien spaceships."
I like how you get right into their minds, right down to adding the extra dialogue without it contradicting the show - it could have happened while they were off-screen, or too softly to be heard by anyone else. |
 MotherCHOWGoddess 2005-08-28 . chapter 3"Sorry, sir, the alien ate my gun."
*SNERK* -- yah, I know that's not what you wrote, but that's what ran thru my mind... So, it's situation normal at Cheyenne Mountain with Stan and Mario. I'm almost liking these better than The Barrista, not sure why... |
 Cleo the Muse 2005-08-28 . chapter 3Yay! Another fun peek into the lives of these poor, hapless airmen.
"What was it with that scientific geek and alien chicks?"
Indeed. |
 Mierin 2005-08-28 . chapter 3 I am SO enjoying this story! It's great how it's from a POV that most people probably wouldn't think of. And it's funny! |
 lennielight 2005-08-28 . chapter 3Just loving this series! So nice to be a fly on the wall and see things from a different perspective. Stan and Mario are great in their "ordinariness" and the way they deal with the extraordinary. I especially loved your insight that "alien chicks always have superpowers." |
 Dimac99 2005-08-28 . chapter 3LOL, funny stuff! Poor guys, they just don't hae much luck, do they? Except maybe with Tessa... ;-) Update soon, please. |
 iamdragonrider 2005-08-28 . chapter 3lol aliens get you every time! |