Your storys good but i get lost in whats going on.

Well, that was quite a trip! I found parts of it to be rather confusing, but still very, very intruiging. I'm surprised no one has reviewed this before. Also, I really love the little twist at the end. I understood it, hehehe... Oho... and one of my favorite characters too. I wonder why no one ever thought of that before. Keep up the good work!