 Mister Fahrenheit 4/20/06 . chapter 1Heheh...very nice! There are some minor spelling errors here and there, but I really don't think it affects much, if anything. I always love reading entertaining one-shots, but not enough of them can be what they should be; ending on a surprisingly sweet, comedic, or dark line. I especially love how you ended Sex and Violence. Somehow, Albel seems like the type to enjoy a bit of rough play, doesn't he? |