 P.T. Piranha 2008-03-18 . chapter 2Okay. I'll have to look into that half-dragon thing.
And I'd like to say I think Sheik is a girl because Sheik isn't a seperate identity, it's Zelda wearing a disguise. Or maybe Marth just thought Sheik was a guy. I don't know.
But I do know:
1. Good so far.
2. I'm going to bed it's freaking one o' clock! |
 P.T. Piranha 2008-03-18 . chapter 1Very good. But I don't recall EVERYONE in Melee having a clone.
I'd like to see you do one during Super Smash Bros. Brawl of Olimar. |
 Dragon of Twilight 2007-08-13 . chapter 6let SOMETHING good happen to Marth! PLEAZ? |
 Yoshizilla-Rhedosaurus 2006-06-03 . chapter 1I haven't noticed this fanfic before, so I might as well read it. I mean, come on! I rarely read fanfics about Marth, Roy, Zelda, or Link...but this seems quite interesting...and funny, too. *coughreadmystoriescough* No messages were hidden in this review. *smiles and runs out the door* |
 doubledude 2006-04-16 . chapter 6Heh, good job. And if you still need help, Bowser could be Yoshi's clone, they have the same down B attacks and their forward smashes are the same to. |
 shadowdragon93 2005-11-08 . chapter 6 that was very interesting and great!^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^ hope u write more fics! and... what happened 2 roy? |
 Fairy Red 2005-10-11 . chapter 6Oh... cool! I can't wait to see what'll happen next! This is a really cute fanfic!
Mario: Last week, you were on the verge of flaming it.
Me: ..Well, now I like it.
Mario: Okay...
Me: ^_^ I can't wait for next week! See you later! |
 The Tears of Ages 2005-10-10 . chapter 6o.o; First of all, I'm really sorry for not reviewing sooner. I've been kind've busy, but I guess that isn't a very valid excuse/reason now is it?
Well, on with the chapter. It was quite possibly the best one yet! Especially the driving part. Marth's so convinced that he's the one doing everything right and everyone else is driving wrong! And the play! That was great too! Very entertaining as well, might I add. ^^
As always, I await when you update next, and I also can't wait to see the new situation that you have all planned out! And lets hope that I review sooner next time...^^;
Update soon! |
 Shiore 2005-10-07 . chapter 6yeah good story. i was roaming here and found this good story. what good fortune i have. great now i'm talking strange. well what the heck? update soon. |
 classic dogma 2005-10-06 . chapter 6Oh, what a fun story! The humour is excellent; I liked chapter six in particular. Marth driving - the horror - Ness as his instructor in the... erm... art, craft, whatever you wish to call it, of driving... - oh dear - and poor Nana! My commiseration. I eagerly look forward an update! |
 Royal Kenya 2005-10-04 . chapter 6This story is madly funny! Pichu's so cute and Link can't talk. It's just ha ha funny! |
 Fairy Red 2005-10-04 . chapter 1oh no... HOW DARE THEY SUGGEST DEATH ON MY DEAR MARTH ALTEA?!?!
Mario: Maybe cause you weren't there?
Me: ...Maybe. Oh, well. BUT STILL, IF SOMEONE TRUED TO KILL MY MARTH ALTEA IN MY PRESENCE, OH YES, THERE'LL BE HELL TO PAY!
Muses: *all exchange glances*
Rose: Even if the one threatening you... ah, 'Marth Altea' was one of us? We're bonded to you, Fairy Red.
Me: ...No, not you guys. I'd defend Marth with my life!
Mario: Oh,mama mia... she's getting carried away again. Muses! 8snaps fingers*
(Zelda, Link, and Chikara pick Fairy Red up and drag her away)
Me; NO! WAIT, I WASN'T FINISHED! NO--
Mario: Sorry you had to witness that... For reasons best known to herself, that fairy has fallen head-over-heels in love with "marth altea". She hopes to become "Mrs. ? Altea". Hah.
Nana: Anyway, this was a great fanfic! it inspired even us!
Rose: but you stole my idea!
Mario: So? It's still a great story! We'll be back next tuesday! Bye-bye! |
 Babygurl278 2005-10-04 . chapter 6 Another chapter! Wee! I'm glad you finally updated. I was gettin worried that this might be an unfinished story...my worse nightmare. Haha. O jus to let you kno I somehow ended up at your myspace. Haha, strange. It's coo tho. You should check mine whenever you get the chance. Anyway, love the chapter! Plz update! Ur writin is amazing. I jus love Marth! Okay I'll stop... |
 Libster 2005-10-03 . chapter 6 Well it DID take a while...but it was so freakin' hillarious that it really doesn't matter! Whoa, whoa, whoa...Roy needs Starbucks?! That's a little hard to believe! Keep on updating! ^.~ |
 Blazing Fool 2005-10-03 . chapter 6No! Roy has been taken by Starbucks! They are EVIL! And everywhere! There's even a Starbucks in the White House! Dangit... First they infiltrate my nation, now my favorite video game... They are going DOWN! (*starts to walk away*)
Oh yeah. This chapter was awesome, especially Ness brainwashing Marth. Now if you'll excuse me... (*grabs Falchion and stalks off*) |