comatic state means she has a chance of going into a coma.

aw - such a sweet story! I loved the ending! Just that last line! It really was the best and most powerful part of the whole story! love, glPiItAer

i really like this story. i figured since you always read my stories, i should read one of yours. i've only seen the W.I.T.C.H TV show once or twice, but I liked it, and your summery at the beginning really helped. you're a really good writer!! i don't know why i didn't read this before...

AWSOME! is it over? if not plz rite more if so sequel! plz!

Wow! This rocked! I totally loved it!! Awesome job dude! I'm so dying for more, so keep it up and have fun!! ^_^*

Izzy aka ShalBrenfan

first fineshed one i've read. em@le me when yove wrighten another one. i am definatly adding you to my fav authors list

i'm not singed in but i do have a file and i have regesterd, and almost compleated my story!

Well. let me just say, you spelt Kandrakar wrong. it's a
K, not a C. i made the same mistake but i corrected it.

make Caleb come back and. (before i tell you, are you for
WxC or CxC. it's a WxC for me.) P.s. if your thick it means WillxCaleb. well make him two time Corny.

Great! This was a great story and I'm glad you finished it! You did a great job!

Yeah, that's how I felt too. Good chap, and I'm glad Will's back and up on her feet!

DUDE! SUCH A CUTE STORY! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! SOON! OR I'LL STAB U WITH A SPORK!

oh my god that is a great story. i love the plot and how you were true to the way the real auther wrote, by having each chapter be told by one characters. the only thing i would worry about is grammer. but besides that i love the story i couldnt stop reading the story. please write more soon.

Ouch! Cornelia's wishing DEATH on Will? That's just plain mean and wrong.

Whoa! Very dramatic and completely awesome! Keep writing please! This is a very good story!

Will Will get better?I hope so! Update soon!

yo next chapter