Dang girl, you write a lot of yaoi! I like it! _

*pulls out a hanky*

oh, it was so good! i loved it! the ending was beautiful!

*blows nose*

I don't think that you'd necessarily call this a yaoi, but a shonen-ai. Of course, that's all in your opinion since YOU wrote it. Heh. ;

Very well written Kat! I enjoyed so much. T_T This didn't get enough reviews! Damn the public! T_T

A DIFFERENT ENDING? HOW *DARE* YOU! Haha, I'm just kidding. XD;

...I can't think of anything... just... keep writing... ;

Nall is so mean! *chucks a clam at him*

Anyway, all previous praise comments are repeated. Um... update. Or feel my wrath.

man, you update FAST!

hmm... Lord Yuan... smexy... :P

(heheh, i didn't notice there were more than 2 chapters before... ')

i totally love this ficcie! yay! and i'm hoping for updates! whieh!

heeheeh! good chappie!

one thing though, i thought angels didn't have to eat? or is it just some freaky reflex to have breakfast every day?

anywayz, keep it up!

Well... Jargonelle's a type of pear so I'll be willing to hunt people down for you. _

One thing though: I think it's spelt Derris-Kharlan. But other than that, I love reading this, it's building up really well and that was a nice river analogy.

woah... gloomy. suspense is a powerful weapon, and when used right, makes the reader journey on on the path to the conclusion...

Ok, i have no idea why i wrote that, it just seemaed to fit. great job, can't wait to continue!

Giant pear... hmm...

WHAT THE HELL? ONLY FIVE REVIEWS? This is so much better than that! The plot, the writing... it's all excellent, Kat. You've done a swell job with this! I GIVE IT AN HONORARY STICKER *hands you a sticker with a cupcake on it*

(review!) hey, i love Yuan and Kratos. it would be cool if you continued. perhaps later on doing a time skip of about 40 years, when Kratos leaves Cruxis, and Yuan can be all "Damn Kratos! you promised you wouldnt leave me!" and then Clara dies and Kratos comes back and Yuan is all "Yay! *glomp*"

Love how you depicted Noishe in this.

And anything with Yuan and Kratos in always makes my day. _

Good luck with the rest of it.

Well, if Kratos says to review, I'd better review! hehehe, awesome job, thoguh i don't think Mithos would try to turn his friends into lifeless beings. anyway, keep writing the good stuff!

Kewl, I'm in love with this pairing too. I hope to see another chappy _