update plzz!! it's getting so good! I want to know what happens next! keep up the great job!

pls continue the story. kinda fond of flay x yzak pairing.

absolutely interesting,
i have thought about this possible
pairing when i first watched GS, and
since kira and flay were obviously not
ending up together, i had hoped this two
would, to say the least. but unfortunately
what i remembered of this two pairing
was the scene where yzak was shown looking
at the door of the room where flay was sleeping,
and there's no more after that.

nice idea of yzak pretending to be flay's lover,
they do look good together.

baby's breath~

Great chapter plz update soon!

Hey are you gonna update anytime soon? And did you change anything in this chapter? God Bless.

great story.when is chapter 7 coming

LOVE IT ! This story is raelly convincing than the others , If a might say so ur a raelly talented writer.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I love this story!
Update soon!
You've made what others consider impossible possible!
You're a talented writer! Please do continue!!
It's so rare to find alternative pairing these days or writers that are willing to take a challenge and start a new fad or take a risk without worrying about upsetting reviewers.

omg i love your story! I hope he starts liking to kiss her and stuff!! It is gonna be so cute!

this is cute mann!! lolz i hope he starts liking kissing her,

I like the plot so far and this pair sounds very unique and yeah I can see them together.
One week, such a fast dateline.. I wonder if Flay would escape by then..
Update soon. ;D

OMG MUST READ MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!! PLEASE! I GOTTA READ MORE!! THIS FIC ROCKS

Ok, I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed for a long time, so here I am!

The last chappie WAS NOT SUCKY. I liked it so much! And I also liek the way you portray Flaay's and Yzak's relationship here! Whee! I love this!

Ah update soon please!! oh by the way awesome story so far. i guess i am not the only one in the universe who thinks that Yzak could actually be with someone other than Dearka.

I must say that I'm addictated to your story. Finding a Pro-Fllay story is kind of hard. Hope you update soon,

Lily