Nice

So sad, but so true. You didn't really put Ino in there. Its more like her unconsious thoughts. I like it though it suits Ino well!

INO!! she's smart and unbelievably amazing. GREAT protrayal. I like how this was written. She's so cool.

I like it! I can't say anything about her in-character-ness because this is more or less how I see her: strong, proud, stubborn, and very sarcastic about things she thinks are stupid (when or if she doesn't see the bigger picture). I also love that you've got her more interested in smells and images rather than words. Her senses guide her far more than her logic and it seems to serve her well. Nicely done :D