hi i am finalfantasyjoe the first story was very i was happy to read it.i was even happyer to read a sequal but youhave not made any more chapters to this story pleas countinue this story.

I personally love this story! Update! Update! Update! :) Pleasse?? *grin* The bad guys are soo bad and the good guys are soo good. Good flow of story line and nice character development. Some stories are so jarring. Good Job. You brought life to this story for me.

Was wondering... what about that hunting party, when they got back to the Mother Ship, that was suppose to be hunting a queen? I thought they'd cause trouble then but it just sort of floated off... Is there anger at Emma? or somthing else? Will they cause Emma trouble in the future? Or is that a dropped thread? Questioning minds want to know :-)

I was curious if you plan on finishing this story? I absolutly love it!

hey this is an awesome story but i just wonder when ur gonna update its been like months...any way its really one of the best and well rounded aliens/pred storys iv ever read looking forward to updates

I don't review often, but I have read your story a long time ago. I was wondering if you have thought about updating this story. I loved the first one and would like to see more.

please update soon i luv this sequel ^_^

Hi I've been reading your fic before this one and when I finished I started reading this and I'd just like to say I really like your fics, concepts and ideas very inspiring and thoughtful my only reguest would be please, please, please watch your spelling if you still find it hard to do get some one to beta it they'll read through it and change mistakes it would make it alittle easier to read in places though I can always work out what you meant thats all i can reallu think of. Perhaps some more detail would be nice as what very descriptive areas you have written are gold and worth reading and imagining fully. I really enjoyed sppending my time reading this and thank you for sharing your creativity, I hope to read more from you in the future Kit ^_^

emma and jeuki 3th story. is there going to be a new story

You know I was re reading this and I was wondering. Being the cruel human that I am, what if they mind controlled Jeuki? Hmm... dun dun dun

I liked this story and it's prelude. I think you captured the future sci fi world of Alien and Predator. It's better than most people who set out to do this kind of thing. Whoever said your character was a Mary Sue, was an imbecile. Not only is that uncalled for, it's very insulting. Truthfully I don't think anyone should say that ever to a writer. It only creates fear when making stories. I see that you haven't updated in awhile too. Have you been too busy or uninspired? It helps to make a map of what you want to happen. Like a story board. Anyways keep up the good work and I hope you'll keep writing no matter what because this has serious potential. Have a good one.

I read the firt story and it was great. The second one is even better. Keep up the good word!

this countinuing series it is very good but i now they have to get rid of thyies aliens.but they shoude operate on them to get the aliens out insted of killing them please countinue this story. it is my favorite alien vs predator fanfiction. and i ehant to now if emma has easy going birth.

I have enjoyed reading your stories tremendously, thank you for the experience even if you do not plan to continue this one. But I dearly hope you do! :)

The suspense! I'm thirsting for an update. Gotta see how bad Idorama's ** will get kicked. You write too well to leave this story unfinished, and your dramatic ability more than makes up for the typos here and there. Keep in touch with your muse! :)

Heh, I was worrying about Jeuki and Emma just a couple of chapters ago but seems that the one to worry about is the baby. Is black hole jumping really without its consequences?