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| #1 2007-11-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent! |
| Telturwen 2006-04-30 ch 1,  | abuseI loved reading this story. I think you captured Radgar's emotions perfectly and the swordplay was really well written! |
| XtinethePirate 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseExcellent ficlet! Radgar was always one of my favourite characters in the books, and ou captured his personality perfectly. Volatile, certainly, but never without just cause. And your manner of writing the swordfighting sequence sounded like it could have been pulled right out of one of the novels. Fantastic job. Xtine |
| Pokadot-Giraffe 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was the first King's Blades fanfic I've read,and it was amazing,I loved the way you switched between Radgar and Raider.Wonderful! |
| tigerlily4 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuseAnd that last review (by TL1) was from me...I couldn't remember the e-mail or password I signed up with, so kept entering e-mail/password combinations until I accidently logged into an account I can't even remember creating. Which is odd, but it has my e-mail and name, so. XD. Just explaining! -TL, the confusing one |
| TL1 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuseOhh...Lord of the Firelands has always been one of my favorite books of the series (close second to Gilded Chain). Thanks for combining two of the awesomest characters ever, :D! I seem to keep forgetting that these kids knew each other... ...eh. (by the by, PD is beautiful. Forgot to review, >. |
| SlytherAway 2005-09-02 ch 1, | abuseBut...I thought only the baseborn were let in? That they were criminals or poor and this was pretty much their only chance to make something of themselves? Or...Crap, I'm slow! Did you mean he was...hiding...in a way? Let in for his own protection or something? Anyway, awesome. I love it that someone else in the world appreciates Dave Duncan's genius. Nobody seems to know him. |
| Byrd 2005-08-22 ch 1, anon. | abuse Amazing, Robin, simply amazing. I love the Raider/Radgar changing of names. Your writing never fails to amaze me. |
| Christa 2005-08-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat can I say, Robin? Amazing as always. The characterization was spot on. And I loved this line: “Do that again!” He snatched his saber up. “That was amazing!” |
| Sailor Sol 2005-08-02 ch 1, | abuseI liked it a lot. I especially like how you switched between calling him 'Raider' and 'Radgar'. Especially helped to make the point of how he didn't have 100% control over himself. Good job, as usual. |