wow... seriously this happens in the Sanzo-ikkou!

nice work!

Lovely.

Managed to squeeze both my favourite pairings into teh one Fic, without the use of a Threesome.

Gawgeous Sanzo/Hakkai, nice an' poinent.

Loverly implied Gojyo/Hakkai; great portrayal of Gojyo's thoughts and desires.

n.n

Loved it, really.

Wow... I can just imagine... I can just SEE Gojyo saying that to himself. I love Sanzo and Hakkai together, but this fic made me feel sad for Gojyo...

Good job! ^_^

Lovely work and beautifully written. And Gojyo's voice is so realistic and in character. A joy to read. Cheers~

Ooh, I really like this--it's always so interesting to see their understanding from an outsider (and not-so-outsider) perspective.

*alters between pulling at her hair and laughing insanely* I've been thinking for a while until it dawned that technically, it perfectly complies with the C2 rules. Me claims.

As a sidenote, I especially find believable the part about "for all I know, it isn't anything".

That was so sad yet so sweet, and so true though! I loved this little snippet into Gojyo's thoughts.

oh! sad. nice- love zan

omg. woman. (or man) you seriously and perfectly captured gojyo. its like reading manga. dude, i am overwhelmed. you have serious talent...dont waste it...go write sotries. later.

*smiles*
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Yay. I'd transcribe the discussion we had except I can't remember it all...but...yeah. ^_^
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