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Reviews For: Illusions

Malingo13
2005-12-28
ch 6,
abusei still love this story, but when is she going to become a titan? i cant wait for that. please write more very soon.
your reader,
kara
Laiannon-fae-elf
2005-10-11
ch 6,
abuseYAY! Good story keep it up, where is the plot?
Laiannon-fae-elf
2005-10-11
ch 5,
abuseWow, the description of the fighting was perfect, the scene just popped into my head, I could imagine it easily. Lots of fun!
Malingo13
2005-10-10
ch 5,
abuseyou are doing marvolus darling. sorry i cant spell. cant wait to read more.
your loyal fan,
kara
Malingo13
2005-09-16
ch 4,
abusei like this chapter. you are very good at all of this. and might i add you are very good at the starfire talk. not many people can do that. thanks for listening to my suggestions.
your fan,
kara
curse you nission sline
2005-08-19
ch 4, anon.
abuseadd a kid called wolfboy to oc with raven. If you say yes to ethier a future story or this story i will be watching. No then pooy. Hey JOhnny...JOHNY... it's the venlation monster coming to get you . Im going to eat yor brains. Im hiding in here mahahahhaha. Johnyy:pulls out shotgun shoots the ventalator shaft.
4 masked men fall out singing we are the men in white (their wearing quartine uniforms not k I hate the k.
Curse you nission sline good storyanywhy Hey man you did a good job.
Malingo13
2005-08-17
ch 3,
abusei cant wait to read more. it is a great start. as for coupling, cy with bee and rae with aqualad. but that is my personal opinion. if rae isnt with bb, shes with aqualad. please update soon.
your fan,
kara
harrypotterjunkie
2005-08-16
ch 3, anon.
abuseyay! I liked this chapter and I will keep reading the other ones but I can't promise that I will be able to review so quickly because I have school and I am taking some hard classes but anyways good job once again
harrypotterjunkie
2005-08-15
ch 2,
abusegood job this is getting interesting. I think that a good title for this could be "illusions" Idk i # at coming up with titles too, but keep writing and I will keep r&r
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