 Seraphdragon7 2008-11-19 . chapter 4Hi, I really love your Aladdin story, A Fiend in need is hilarious! Very funny, very exciting, I'd say you got the characters right. I'd like to see some of Jasmine and Sadira in it though. Like the personalities of Eden and Dondi. |
 snarky Beth 2008-10-17 . chapter 4OMG, this story is just too funny, I'm glad I ran into it! The plot line is really good too, very interesting idea. I pray that you continue this story, it has really made me laugh so far :D |
 BAMF Guy 2008-02-01 . chapter 4This story is hilarious, I really hope you continue with it. And thank you for renewing a fandom in me that's been sleeping for nearly a decade. Great job. |
 jla2snoopy 2007-10-29 . chapter 4This is hilarious!! I was seriously laughing my gut out. I hope you update it soon! |
 Amadou 2006-05-29 . chapter 4 I love your style and your sens of humor! Please, update soon, can't wait!! |
 Calluna 2006-05-29 . chapter 4Very cute; I was wondering how you were going to manage to connect all those subplots but I can see now at least partially how it's going to fit together. I love a good in-character humorfic and all the series references, of course. :D |
 Riolaku 2006-04-25 . chapter 4 Awesome! I love this XD It's like watching the series exactly, I would've loved to see this as an episode. You did great! Please update soon and keep at it! I can't wait to read more. ^^ |
 jla2snoopy 2006-04-11 . chapter 1hello there! i just discovered your stories! they're really good. i don't get cable so it took me a little bit of researching to figure out who Mozenrath, Eden, and Xerxes were. but anyways, your stories are good. i'm going to read this one next.
i was wondering if you could possible think about doing a Genie/Eden story? you seem to be good at doing this sort of topic, and there are almost no stories concerning those two here. emial me, if you wish! thanks! |
 TaB 2006-03-28 . chapter 4 Well, its a fluffier story than the disturbing Dandhi/Mozenrath pairing. The garage sale idea is good, although the purple-gunk-up-Al's-nostril is a little gross.
I saw an episode of "Dexter's Lab" that had something similar happen, and everyone turned into alien zombies.
B.t.W., why does Mozenrath call our hero "Al"? I thought he preferred full name basis.
Waiting for your next update! |
 VampireNaomi 2006-02-27 . chapter 4Hilarious! It's amazing how you've been able to create situations in which the characters can be so funny and yet in character. I especially like what you're doing with Eden and Dondi. The garage sale was a stroke of genius. Mozenrath is perhaps a little less menacing as he should, but considering the circumstances, I don't blame him. |
 Ice-Spirit Phoenix 2006-02-27 . chapter 4Hooray for an update! I loved the whole camel costume and garage sale thing. Those were funny. Update again soon please. |
 Spoofmaster 2006-02-26 . chapter 4Hahaha, camel.
The only problem I had with this chapter were the same grammar and tense issues as before. Strill really enjoying this, though. |
 Spoofmaster 2006-02-20 . chapter 3It was a long time between bookmarking this and actually reading it, but I'm really glad I came across it. Really, really glad. It's very much like an actual episode (as far as I can remember--never did see the entire series, and it's been a while besides). Astonishingly in-character and funny, with the added bonus that the details are all right. It's a little bit out there on the premise and there are anachronisms, but if I was a stickler for that I wouldn't be reading Aladdin fic. I noticed a few of what I took to be errors in typing (words in the wrong tense here and there, that sort of thing, nothing big), but it didn't really detract from the overall read. Do you have a beta? I'd be glad to do it if you wished, and I hope you don't take offense at the suggestion, as I hold your writing in the highest regards after reading these chapters. I'd put this in my favorites, but I make it a policy to only list completed fics. Are you planning to continue? |
 VampireNaomi 2005-09-28 . chapter 3This is brilliant! It's not every day that you find a story that's true to the series' spirit. I just can't get enough of this. You're making the characters go through hilarious adventures and they have remained very in character during it all. Can't wait to see what kind of job Mozenrath gets. |
 Alastor 2005-08-27 . chapter 2 Wow, this is pretty good so far, the plot has definately intrigued me. Looking forward for more chapters to read! |