COOL STORY!

OK Very detailed, Very well written, and I loved the way you kept the action and emotions!

Great story!

I LOVED it, I like how they started to fight and then became soft on each other. The fight was excellent too.^^

Such an interesting battle... and a sweet ending. Very well done.

awesome story ^-^ *fav*

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well,i read this piece of work before,but i never got round to reviewing it. sorry sorry! But i loved it a lot,and it's going on my faves. :D

Well thank You Ninjaane for challenging you to write a fic about Bankotsu and Sango. Cuz it was awsome!!

At first I was thinking, hm, this should be interesting, wonder how it's gonna work. Then I was thinking it was moving too fast and blames that on it being a oneshot. But Then as I continued reading, I got more in to what was going on, putting prejudices aside like the two characters I guess were oing at some level, and then I really enjoyed it!

No to mention the ending was wonderful. And thanks for not having them kiss. Even if you wanted to blame the moonlight, extra adrenaline and the fact he had no shirt on and her hair was down, it would have been too much too soon.
And since you didn't play it that way, this oneshotter turned out amazing!!

And he called her beautiful. And she thinks there's hope for a once dead bandit who's only alice because of a jewel shard. Much like her brother I suppose.

It was a lovely little vinniet. Thanks for writing.

...Eh.
I just think that the first version of this story was better. I miss it. :[

Wonderful!

For the first time in ages, I took a few moments to browse and came upon this.

Excellent call on the pairing, and the chemistry was fun and even plausible, I feel. I liked your characterization. Their dialogue felt natural, too, along with the accidental intimacy. His attentiveness was cute and his flirtations seemed original. I love that he put her hair back in a ponytail before he took off.

He'd be a dangerous admirer to have, no doubt. The impression I get after reading this is that he'd go out of his way to run into her. Even stalk her. He was always a favorite of mine, anyhow, and I like Sango a good deal.

Thank you for writing this!

Wow, that was really good. *sigh* i think u should have made them kiss in the end:P That part was so sweet I think, but this was good too!

more please

Wow! Very well written! &Until now, I hadn't given much thought to Sango/Bankotsu fic, but now.. just wow!

Although I have to agree with Raven Shinobi, I thought the whole love thing was slightyl abrupt, and completely unexprested.

Still though, it was an awesome one-shot.

wow, this was really cool!