I like it, this story at keast i haven't read any others yet. ^_^ I would be happy though if you update this one, its getting very intresting. ^_^

Yay yay yay!! You're writing again! I can't wait to read dearie! :)

oh my god! i love this story! i love tragic things...i just do...and i REALLY(times a million) love this! i hope that you update really soon!

Loving the "re-" words that don't exist Rae. At least, I don't think they exist. Anywho! Awesome sotry! Lots of horses! And sometimes it takes me a minute to adjust to a new perspective but I think I've got the hang of it now.

as always, i am liking the story. i finLLY FINISHED reading this (so many distrctions). um...lets see... i wanna see some witch stuf and magic(yea im a 5 yr old)...wtfm(ate) is a Reigouhane (so ctrl Ved that one) directly translated,...hm...btw 2ft or more is short sword, anything less is dagger (or so ive heard , im no expert)...um...h/o i got jollyrancer in my teeth... yea so...yea where in BS can u get two pizzas for 20 bucks?!?! assgn#16 145/70-73, oh thats my math hwmrk...umm and yea... write more...and faster...oh and u cant start another story hbc then u wont finish this one...or the otherones...or anything...oh and remember, if u wanna kill me of, IMPALE through the gut/heart! no de-caps...maybe poison, but thats kinda pussE, i dunno oh? am i gett off onto a tangent? oh well...bye

Great work I'll read the rest later...keep it up with the story it really is great. Pixie

very good chappie, and guess what? i hail from the horse world as well. I can't believe that Yusuke and Kuwabara would be afraid of horses, they're harmless, well at least mine are. oh and, what stlye does Raevyn ride in, Hunter, English, Dressage, Western, Stock seat? You weren't very clear on that, cause i know that Western, STock Seat, English and Dressage have chaps, but i couldn't really tell what type, and Hiei is very umm... crazy or insane when high off of sugar or sweet snow (ice cream). Please update soon.

@_@ you really do have to go over the horse riding ting with me. By the way, great chapters. Mary-sue, basically a perfect girl that gets everything she wants.

I wasn't exactly moved by this, but it was still really good. It wasn't too emotional, but you still hit up the emotional pain of the character. I was just really surprised after reading the warning-thing that I wasn't balling or curseing some rapist for haveing already broken the main char's spirit, ya know? Good job, two points for makin her a believable fighter without being a mary-sue. Yay!

Erin

PS. THANK YOU for hitting the bf for cheatin.

i adore (i can't spell worth crap!) your story it rocks toe socks and thats saying somth'n

good job with the horse part ^^ im glad someone got horse stuff right, it annoying when ppl write about it and think its right when it isnt...im rambling now, srry but anywho hurry and update

great story, please update soon. This story is great.

i'm too lazy to sign in, and i'd like to see the pic you drew of raevyn. so, please send it to me! i love your story so far, it's really good. i've never read a story like this, and i really enjoyed it. please update soon!

later,
robin

That was great I'll finish the rest later...Honestly It was one of the best stories I've read so far. Pixie

aw, you just make me want to hug her. lol yea. When I was younger I got caught up within a bad group. Thank god i left. Anyways, good chapter.