I absolutely ADORED that chapter! It was so freaking funny and cute at the same time. It makes me NEED more. It kinda reminds me of myself, though. I mean, I'm the oldest of 4 children (I'm the only girl) and even though, I'm the oldest, they think it's necessary to be taller! It makes me so mad! lol. Love your story :)

aw, I love this. It's so cute and sweet and...amazing :)

hehehehe... yes, tall people do suck. but when they are that cute, it's okay. Great job!

aw! Again, i'm just struck with the amazing beauty of your peices. You have such a descriptive voice... I just love it to no end! Great work!

BEAUTIFUL! oh god... i'm like, close to tears... i could just be really tired... or this could be the best damn story i've ever read. How amazing. I cant even describe it all right now... Maybe i'll message you in a day when my thoughts calm down. Oy. Amazing. Just amazing. Totally inspiring. gaw!

that... was so... CUTE! gosh... they are perfect for each other... at least, in this world they are! lol. great piece.

oh ** me. My god, that was heart wrenching! I was like aww, ohh no, how terrible,, squue! great job. loved it. Must keep reading.

I totally agree...tall people suck. They are handy to have around but they suck.

It was cute and light. Great job of showing everyday life in this. A stupid little arguement and teasing turning into foreplay. I love it. But alas I'm beginning to get repetative.

Keep writing love and I'll definitely keep reading it. You know I'm here if you ever need me...regardless of the disappearing act I've pulled lately...

Your perfection amazes me. You tell me that I'm good, well...let me send it right back to you. The imagery on this is great. I can see it. Marco burrowing, Dylan cooking, and just all the light. The breakfast table that they share with small smiles that are only for each other. It allows me to think it's possible in some bizarre distant future. Congrats on another moving piece.

Don't know how I missed this chapter but I did. So, I'll review it now...Bloody Brilliant.

It's poignant and sweet. It's almost like I can see the heat of the night surrounding them. It's a type of stillness that can shatter at any moment but the characters are praying it never ends. It's too much for words.

You have proven your worth again. I love it and you, dear. Keep it up.

I know I'm six months late with this review but it's been a long six months.

Great chapter. I like how you incorporated the song in so fluidly that it fit perfectly. Great job, love. You have once again shown that you are an excellent writer.

tall people DO suck. sorry, i hope you aren't tall :)

MORE PLEASE??

so, so gorgeous. you write them perfectly.

...do you need me to tell you how great this was? i'm sure you realise anyway. i am blown away once AGAIN. how do you do it?

i didn't think it was possible to be continually surprised by a writer. every time i read a new chapter, it gets better. i know i'm reading this late. please, PLEASE add more