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| shelly 2008-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have no idea if you're still writing E2 fic but I hope you are because this was an awesome story! There are still fans like me reading and writing E2 fic, so please keep writing! |
| aliarose 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseNew E2 fic! i was hoping the dvds would get some more people writing! and Danziger Looming is so very very Danz. and i like the interactions..already sniping at each other. |
| Hopeful Romantic 2005-09-10 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very nice piece. I liked how you got into John's head very effectively. I enjoyed the detail as well, and the characterizations were nice and strong. |
| notthereanymore1111 2005-09-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was great. Their interactions were amusing and I love that they both underestimate eachother. And that neither backs down. I also loved that Devon's reasoning for not offering John the job initially was based on True, very in character. And I love the scene at the end between John and True. He's such a wonderful dad! Good point in your notes about whether or not they had met before the pilot. I never thought about that before. I'll have to rewatch the pilot ep and see if there's any indication that she actually does recognize him. I would assume a control freak like Devon would at the very least know who her Ops Chief was. So it would make sense that she knows who he is but is just pretending not to in order to get rid of him. |
| Fanwoman 2005-08-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was delightful. I loved the comparison of Devon's office to a castle. The details give so much texture to the setting and situation. Plus, it sounds so much like Danziger that I could hear his voice as I read. |
| Lattelady 2005-08-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat story...the irony at the end was a wonderful touch. Would love to read more if you can be persuaded to write it. |
| Frek 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseAs always, great fic. Made a lot of sense as far as the series goes. Keep up the good work! The One and Only Frek |
| Rebecca 2005-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked this one. I've been on a desperate hunt for E2 fic ever since I got the DVDs a few days ago. This one was nice. I always like the Danziger-gets-the-job -fics. I enjoyed his behavior towards Devon - very in-characer. Like how he underestimated her and assumed it was a "schmoozing" meeting. And that he didn't say "oh God, I misjudged her terribly" when he found out the truth. Loved his concern for True and his desire to give her a better life. Oh, and I liked the bit about the trip being two years away (even though we all know it'll be more like four) because it really compliments the mentions of how they tried to tie Devon up in red tape and delay her as much as they could. The only thing missing was a mention how crazy Devon must be to undertake this plan. |