You could have done so much better with that story, it was not very well structured, you could have made it seem a bit more interesting or at least longer. You kind of threw me off a little bit once in a while it was odd... One or two things didn'
t make sense and confused me but that is just me.

I'm getting used to the short passages. But besides that, I like it, it's getting better. O The suspence!

Again...short.

Even though the chapters are already up and you have a lot more than 5 reviews I'll leave one anyway, lol. I like it so far but it is a bit short...

Eeps! I thought I already reviewed! Oh dear! Well, it was a wonderful story, to be sure. It was a little confusing however, though I believe that's part of the charm. Either way, I really liked it!

And you mentioned me! Wai! But why? What'd I'd do that was so special? All I did was review and threaten you like everyone else...

Loved it and keep up the great work!

~Kurai~

Ow! That was great! I was on the eage of my seat the whole time!

I loved it! The story was so cute and sad at the same time!

aw... only one more chapter?

EVIL!! Finish it! Right this moment! I will not finish "Sakura Snows" until you finish this one! So you might wanna hurry! HEHEHE!! (Love the story though)

I loved it. Please update soon.

I loved it. Please update soon.

i luv this story! this is my absolute favorite type of stroy in the world! EVER. update!

um...please, delete the review with the email address!! Please!!

Gah! And you call ME evil!?! Finish! Or *I* shall never sleep!!

I like it. Can you post chapter 2?