Omg, that last line... It was just PERFECT. It made my heart hurt... And let me tell you, that is not easy to do. ^^ I love the stories you write of Hakkai and Sanzo. You're one of my favorite writers. ^_^ This fic is just so... Wow. I'll never forget this fic.

Oh my god. This is so good, Vez! I love it! It's been so long since I read a good fic (not that I read many fics these days but yeah...)

Great job!

This was so good and well-written! I liked your point about them being too stubborn to fail... aw, but did it have to be so sad? =)

*jumps up and down* An actual 83 story! YAY! *lol* Sorry, but it's been a while since I've been able to read a new one (this poor pairing doesn't seem to be as popular as before *sniffles*). Your story breaks my heart. I kept wanting Hakkai to just charge in and declare his love (except for the fact that that would completely ruin the overall feel of the story). I cannot help but want to see it in Hakkai's POV as well, though. I would LOVE to see this continued ^_^ Or, atleast more 838 stories! Keep up the great work!