I'm not sure if it's because it's been a while since you last updated this or because I'm not feeling my best at the moment, but I thought that this chapter was a bit confusing. You had some run on sentences and some dialogue issues, with missing or misplaced quotes and new speakers not getting a new paragraph. But all in all, I'm glad to see you're working on this again. I'll re-read it when I'm feeling better; maybe it's just the loopy head messing me up.

Boy, you're a big Kyo/Kagura fan, aren't you?

Nice chapter! I like how the two parts are getting more different from each other as it goes on. If it continues, you'll almost be writing two seperate fics further on. I'm still looking forward to seeing where this goes. Good job!

how sad! poor kagura... cant wait for the next chapter!

Intersting...if a bit confusing. The ones in italics were what she thought she should do or a different version of what she was doing...?

This is based on the idea of the movie "Sliding Doors", right? Loved that movie. Love the idea of using that kind of plot with Kyou and Kagura and Haru. If the rest of the chapters are laid out in the same method (half Kyou/Kagura and half Haru/Kagura), then it looks like it's going to be something for fans of both pairings. I'm really, really liking this idea and looking forward to what's coming next. Keep up the great work with this one!

This is so interesting. will there be more chapters? i hope so, i would love to see how history was changed more because of kagura's childhood choice.
please more chappies?
Knuxgirl

aww... this was so cute, and you stayed close to Kagura's personality.