So, Rose knows about Jake but he doesn't know that? Good story. Please update.

nice please add more soon!

That was by far the weirdest thing that you have written in your entire life. I actually liked the action that you used to portray the many events, however, you repeated yourself way too much in the story. Oh well, it was pretty good for the most part.

Xara O'Connor

Very emotionally moving... I really like this chapter, but there is one problem. I happened to become very confused when Sirah was telling the story because you did not really give a good signal indicating that there was a flash-back. At first, I thought that she was being interrupted by the woman's voice, but I know now that it is not. There are some less astute readers than I am around here, so you should make that more clear. I love you.

Xara O'Connor

whoa. funky POV's on sirah's parents' death day...i would use a better word, but i can't find any. anyways, i LOVED this chapter, i'm REALLY excited for the next one! hope you update soon!!

OMG they noe who each other is wow i like this one...i kinda dont get the title but i like it update it soon

I believe that I tried to make a review here, but it did not allow me. It basically said that this chapter was mediocrely-written, and that Jake may have tried to give her coffee. God save my soul.

Xara O'Connor

...Okay... nice little chapter there. Perhaps you should have added some length to it. Other than that, you have done a pretty good job. Jake tried to give her some coffee, did he not? Oh well, that is cute. I love you.

Xara O'Connor

So... where is the story that included all of your reviewers. I thought that this was it, but apparently, I am not seeing it. Well, whatever. This story seems quite nice, but you repeat yourself way too much in the first paragraph; it bothers me. Oh well, how is your school going? Tell me via E-mail... and on Monday, look and see what mail or package that you have. ::smiles::

Xara O'Connor

This is an awesome chapter. Short, but awesome. I think this is the best version I've read so far on fanfiction where Rose finally finds out about the American Dragon's true identity. Great job!
And thanks for the pronunciation on Sirah's name. I like her name. It's really pretty.
Anyway, update soon! I would like to know what Rose will do now that she knows. ^_^

Another great chapter of a great story... ^_^

I hope to hear more of this story. I'm loving this.

Well, I'm off to work on my fics. Adios.

♥ ADJL-Freakazoid ♥

oh, i feel so bad for her! she's six, almost seven, and she's an orphan who is hated by humans!! she has to run away to escape the huntsclan!! and she was orphaned when she was three!! how sad..i'm gonna go cry now...and also go to sleep...so #1, goodnight, #2, LOVE the story, #3, hope you update soon!!

Hey! Sorry I didn't review your 2nd chapter in time. I was at a family reunion 1200 miles away from home! I would have used my aunt's computer, but last weekend was just so hectic!
Anyway, your story is going very well. I really like it so far. Can you tell me how to pronounce her name for me, though? It's unfamiliar and I'd like to know how it should be pronounced. Thanks. Also, how old is Jake in this story? I'm thinking maybe around 17 or something? Because if she was about 3 and if he was fighting hunstgirl about the same time he is in the series now, I'd say he would be around that age, but I'm just guessing. I suppose he could have been older during the fight...
Well, anyway, keep writing and update soon!

wow its really emotional i like it

Aww,this is so sad.I love Sirah,especially her name because it reminds me of my cousin Siearra and they sort of have the same personality.Hope you update,um,you're apple sause story too.I really think that was an awesome idea to inquire everyone else for charators instead of just conjuring up you're own.
Ch. 8 is up on Dragon Steel also.C yaz!

LP