Why is this under Ranma&Shampoo?

hey! your story is just getting interesting so please don't stop.. your story is catchy and good at the start so please update asap...

nice but a bit short

Short, but not too bad.

great idea, but with ranma being shinji's father.

Question, if ranma is now shinji's father, will ranma start teaching shinji martial arts?

Holy crap man. That is probably the biggest, unorganized, and longest paragraph I have ever seen. You really need to properly paragraph your writing here.

If you don't know what I'm talking about then here are a few tips...

When someone else starts speaking, you need to start a new paragraph. Sentences like...

Akane looked at the stars for a moment before she headed back inside the dojo. "Stupid Ranma making fun of my cooking all the time. Why can't he just say something nice for once?" Up above all the houses about twenty miles away, Ranma crawled himself out of the huge crater he had created when he finally landed. "Damn that hurts. I've had enough of this crap, as soon as I get home it's over. Now...where am I?"

Become...

Akane looked at the stars for a moment before she headed back inside the dojo. "Stupid Ranma making fun of my cooking all the time. Why can't he just say something nice for once?"

Up above all the houses about twenty miles away, Ranma crawled himself out of the huge crater he had created when he finally landed. "Damn that hurts. I've had enough of this crap, as soon as I get home it's over. Now...where am I?"

Just make your paragraphing up top like the text you have on the bottom. Seriously man, I'm not even going to try and read this until I can tell one sentence from another.

If you need help though, you can drop me a line.

ClanCrusher

ah the land of stupidness i go there often, flying there in first class at least 15 times a school week. and its all free because i'm a BLOND clear to the core. ;p lol

ttfn

Heh

loving it so far, keep it up, i'm looking forward to what happenes next. althought i can see Misato trying to get Ranma in bed with her.

can someone say REVENGE shinji and Ranma is going to have one crazy time

up date soon K?

Nice but I think a needs a little bit of work.

How comes Ranma got to be a god. God of chaos and fighting is fine and all... but for which pantheon... what happend to the old gods of that domains.

And god of myths makes no sense at all in my opinion.

Noun

myth - a traditional story accepted as history; serves to explain the world view of a people

story - a piece of fiction that narrates a chain of related events; "he writes stories for the magazines"

Gotterdammerung, Ragnarok, Twilight of the Gods - myth about the ultimate destruction of the gods in a battle with evil

mythology - myths collectively; the body of stories associated with a culture or institution or person

or look here for more about it and mythology:

If you have to build in gods and such check out a few mythology sites... that will help.

And I can understand Shinji wanting a new father, who would not if have his, but would that not make him a halfgod like greek roman ones like Hercules, Perseus and the others.

Will the nerima wrecking crew find Ranma. How was life going on for them. How much time passed between Ranma death, his getting his godhood and the wish in the evangelion fandom.

Bytheway:

There are five rivers that separate Hades (greek mythology) from the world of the living, they are:

1. Acheron - the river of woe;

2. Cocytus - the river of lamentation;

3. Phlegethon - the river of fire;

4. Lethe - the river of forgetfulness;

5. Styx - the river of hate.

But really I don't mind to read more of this story. I would like to see how that goes with the a Ranma, the god, and the Angel attacks and such or will the now not happend after there is such a big change.

ho boy, shinji is in for it now, with a new father whos into martial arts he's bound to be taught how to fight, if things have changed to the right extent, its in the satome blood to fight, and eat heheheh.

hope for another chapter soon.

In Misato's own words "Whaa?" Cause this certainly does seem like "Whaa?" Material. Interesting though

more.

good one shot but you should continue it since it looks like a good beginning. o yeah nice crossover with OMG. make ranma a god or something it would be so cool. And have some goddess fall for him.