aww...that was sweet. and sad. I love the little sannin...this was cute and really in-character. I like it!

aw this was super sweet! chibi sannin lolz its love. I love it.

this is really sad and beautiful. love the sannins when they're young.

Oh, sadly sweet, I really liked how you looked into both Orochimaru and Tsunade's minds, such things really do seem possible in their youth.

Aw! I think Oro/Tsun is a great pairing! Even if their aren't many, lol. I just think little Orochimaru is so cute!

That's sweetly sad. I like how it showed the relationship between the two and where Orochimaru's ambitions came from.

How could things have been had he stayed with his teammates? This story seems to shed some light on the answer.

loved it. its hard to do these two at such an early age and you've done it very well. I don't know how more in character they could be. The message is very good as well, thanks for a great read.

aw...that's sad...but cute at the end...

Loved it

I hope you continue. please do. im thankful for people, like you, who write unique pairings!

Aww. I love it.

... aww!

(It's probably not a good thing that that's the only remark I can make about those guys.)

it's a nice story...i liked the pairing.

Orochimaru was so cute as a child

I love the thoughts that run through Orochimaru's head, the fact that he tried to "unthink" his feeling for Tsunade. GAh, this is really sweet. I love it. :D

found a couple of spelling errors-"insistance" should have two e's and there was an instance where "whose" should have been used instead of "who's"-but i mean, that's all so insignificant because what you have here is an utterly amazing and heartfelt look at the two, their relationship to each other, to jiraiya, and to sarutobi. the oro POV was my favorite part, i think you captured perfectly what i imagined to be his young thoughts to be. i just wish there was more!