AW THAT WAS SO SWEET it wasn't like a smexxi cute it was plane sweet that was awesome great job ^_^

Awesome story. I love the style that you've written this in, and the sequence of the events. ^^

i read it on TONFA, but i'll review here, since i don't have an account there and i'm to lazy to make one...ON WITH THE REVIEW

THAT WAS AWESOME! awesomeawesomeawesome i wanted to laugh, cry, 'aww', squeal like a fannie, and now i really need a shower. excellent story.

Really good!

Are you kidding me? YOU wrote "Cake"?

It's only one of my all time faves, am skimming through right now but was diverted to your tonfa page by a rec list and found Cake to be just the perfect clash of heart and duty esp for a jilted Dobe and a remorseful Teme.

Am not in the right mood to surmise on it because I've just been laughing my head off at the 'great debate' but Cake is a timeless beauty :)

LOVE!

I really love this

Aww...that is so cute. :)) I was just browsing SasuNaru fics from the very last page and I found this cute little story. :)) I really love it. I love the sweetness of this pairing and you captured the essence of love that I wanted between them . :))

Bittersweet would be the perfect word for this wouldn't it? I love it :)

Aw...

I love the ending. You should use this as a prequel to something.

i want to cry~~this is so sad and wonderful at the same time..

OK. AQUARD, BUT I LIKED IT!!

So lovely! I adore this story. I love the idea of Sasuke returning every year for his birthday even though he lives in Sound. And the end, well, that's just so cute! Now I'm off to read the uncut version *cackles*

That story was so well written. Very beautifully written I really Enjoyed it Thnx.

loved this one. i read it on tonfa, but am so faving it, and you, here. quite amazing.