um... kay. It was hilarious, cute, and had a cheesy ending, like most romantic humor stories. very good. *applause* I loved it.

may i just say that the second ending is fucked up.

Bwahahahahhaha that was so funny!
i loved it! Bwahahahahahahah

*heart*

That was one helluva ride, but...I definitely enjoyed it!

--mad cackle--

*heart*

I do like the final ending but i also liked the first one you put in to an extent and to a lesser extent chp27. Although while reading 24 to 27 i was trying to work out which one i hated the least because i thought you werent gonna end this properly ?_?

Anyway, the first 2 chapters were really serious and on thosalone i was thinking "this is a new fav"! But then it went all really silly for many chappies and i was thinking "Blast the authors gone and ruined the potental and totally screwed this one up..cuz it was just too silly (there were some little serious bits or amusing bits but the rest of it was rather lame)"

BUT THEN, after the koi (fish) chapter and Marik starts pondering its like seriousnes come back in again...with some tastier and better played silly thrown in too...but not so much and i started liking it more again! Wo wo Go you!

? Mind you, now that its finished and especially upon reading Yugi's reflection about how it all happened, I do find I dont mind the early crazyness quite as much. PLUS you've made me feel all silly in the process ^_^ er so...yeah

Anyway, it worked out well...though we could have done without the multiple endings as well as out of sync comments (like from the author or just random nonsense) slotted into the middle of this. Also some of the japanese wasnt necessary. Gaki-me I could deal with because its like a name (like Aibou and hikari and yami) sounds far better than saying 'the damn brat' all the time. Kuso, Meishi (sp?), baka, and such is also fine (heck even in chp27 i think where Yugi tells Marik he doesnt like him all in slow japanese...and it actually looks right too...what nationality are you? or did you get that translated for you?...was fine). But some stuff like the chotto matte (sp?), or there's a line somewhere that you didnt explain the meaning of, or Solomon saying my grandchild in japanese instead of english...those ones just arent needed and break things up alot. Plus with all the jap speak why the hell were you using the american names!

BUT YES YOU DID A MARIK X YUGI FIC! THEY ARE SO UNDER DONE! SO I GOTTA GIVE YA CREDIT FOR THAT AND THE FACT THAT IT WASNT AS BAD AS I KNOW THIS REVIEW MAKES IT SOUND LIKE...THATS JUST ME CRITICISING o_O isn't a fav of mine, sorry, but i did enjoy the read...so thanx again!

Wow you have a lot of chapters. ^^ I don't think I'll get to all of them, but I can try.

this is a very good story!

Awesome!

OMG! the end is so freakin' funny!

that was a good. funny too. Good job!!

HAHA! :D Yay! Congrats on finishing your story! However, I do feel the need to point out one thing...

/You liked to your precious Tea/

Shouldn't it be "lied"? ^ ^ Just thought I'd point it out.
Anyways, Congratulations again!

Meh... I'm to lazy to log in. xD
Funny ending! I especially loved the... conversing eyeballs. o_o
Yeah... too bad that's the end. ;.;
Bravo though!

This was so funny. Poor Yami, at least he is sarting to accept it.
Bakura and Malik should just give up on Ryou and date each other. Ryou should date Tea and Seto should date Yami. Joey should date Duke. That would leave Serenity for Mokuba.
And they all lived happily ever after.
Good story and great chapter.

Nice ending. Now that you decided to have one. Kinda glad that you did,kinda, go with a Marik/Yugi pairing. Good effort,looking forward to future efforts. Later

*shrieks* I love this chapter so much!! I'm so glad you finally did the real ending (this IS the real ending, right?)! It was wonderful, and I loved the part with Malik and Bakura's bet. You did a wonderful job and I hope to read many more fics from you.

o-o That got pretty weird. ^ ^ Hee hee, I like it.