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| Irish Drgn 2008-07-26 ch 2,  | abuseSpeaking for a purely Anatomy and Physiology point of view, if one of your characters has medical experience, then they should be explaining things to the paramedics in that language. Sorry, started AP I this quarter. |
| sensellaista 2007-08-02 ch 5, | abuseThis was actually one of the first numb3rs fics I ever read, and propably the first with any romance. The end still makes me smile happily like a silly girl. :) |
| Kiki Cabou 2007-05-25 ch 5, anon. | abuseHow cute! Well, the majority of the story wasn't cute, it was riveting and thrilling, but the end? Very cute. I liked this a lot. You have great flair for writing, paired with inside-out knowledge of this show, and that just makes this more enjoyable. I missed this ep somehow - probably going to have to get the DVD to watch it. LOL |
| Lisa Paris 2007-05-18 ch 5, | abuseI should have reviewed this a long time ago. I love it. I wish it had happened. Thank you for a great story. |
| piep 2007-04-11 ch 5, anon. | abuseoh, I liked it! is the gonna be a sequel? |
| dHALL 2006-08-28 ch 5, | abuseYou are amazing. My favorite alternate ending thus far! |
| annie 2006-05-23 ch 5, anon. | abuseForgot to review this yesterday when I read it. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! Don't know where all your great ideas come from, but I hope they continue for a long time. |
| Lady Winter1 2006-05-11 ch 5, anon. | abusePerfect :) I loved it. Every moment. |
| Betty 2006-04-24 ch 5, anon. | abuseI just finished reading your story. I liked it! I just started reading Numb3rs fan fictions last week. I like Don hurt/comfort stories so thanks for writing this! |
| Rinne 2006-04-19 ch 5, | abuseFantastic story. It's nice to read Don-centric stories. |
| purehalo 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abuseif only we did get to see some serious Don whumpage !! Love this story , i wish they would bring back Karen and Cooper as those characters were excellent and all seemed to vibe off each other perfectly. Karen would make a much better romantic interest than Nadine |
| bluchampaegne 2005-12-28 ch 5, | abuseloved it hun. much love |
| Barkley 2005-10-27 ch 5, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed reading this! |
| Belligerent-road-pylon 2005-08-15 ch 5, | abuseAiee! AWESOME! Thanks for the 'ship(and the email)! VERY COOL! |
| Alice I 2005-08-14 ch 5, | abuseThanks for reading! Now, see that little pull-down menu just below this and to the left? Yes, that's right. The one that says "Submit review"? And the button next to it that says "Go"? Just one little click is all it takes… he he he That is wonderful! I started this story on a different site but it is only posted up to chapter three. When I saw it here with all five chapters posted I couldn't resist. This was a wonderful story. I think that you had everyone very much in character. I also liked the episode Man Hunt and found Don's blithe manner to Karen's flirting a wee bit annoying. He should be attracted to her! She is beautiful, intelligent and he is a totally available guy! I liked the way Don said "Yes" at the end of your version and I could easily picture Rob Morrow playing this part exactly as you wrote it. Great story! |