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Reviews For: Dancing in the Rain

codelyokoluvagrl
2007-12-08
ch 1,
abuseaww that was really cute!
Em43
2007-11-10
ch 1,
abuseomg this was awesome!perfect,A+,5 gold stars. but...i wish that it wasn't soo short! plz make a sequel or something!your one of the best authors i have read from so far!Don't stop writing!
fuck this shit
2007-10-22
ch 1,
abuselove it
Tetsu Deinonychus
2007-04-12
ch 1,
abuseIt was nice.
A good pleasent oneshot.
Lyoko Lover
2006-11-04
ch 1,
abuseGood one. A really good story! ^^

There's only one thing to say:

Yumi blushed and smiled, leaning into his touch. Her fingers tentatively brushed his bangs away from his face as she gazed into his eyes. Ulrich tucked her hair behind her ear and whispered,

->HERE: You should have add...Dunno really what. It just seems incomplete.
Yumi's Jade Katana
2006-05-31
ch 1,
abuseThe song is "If I Ain't Got You". I love it ^^ Good job
~*((JADE))*~
Will-the-Titan
2005-09-16
ch 1,
abuseShort, sweet, and to the point. YAY! ^_^
shadowedstar213
2005-08-16
ch 1,
abuseaw... that was so sweet! and incredibly realistic! I love it!
Fox Kitsune
2005-08-09
ch 1,
abuseSO KAWAII! THIS IS GOING ON MY FAVS! i loved the whole story, so sweet! Is abe your boyfriend? just outta curiousity. I think that's sweet that he went to see you! anyway, great story! I LOVE IT!
shari is so cool
2005-08-06
ch 1,
abusethat was really cute! ^^ really good writing! i loved it! keep up the good work!
Mewberries
2005-08-05
ch 1,
abuseThat was pretty cute! :) I found it interesting that you had Odd call Ulrich "wolf-boy". I assume that means you know that Ulrich's name means "Spirit of the Wolf" then, no? :D Very clever! ^_^ Keep writing!
soccergirl869
2005-08-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseok that was so good i really loved
aliice
2005-08-04
ch 1,
abuseAH! I LOVED IT. THE FLUFF. EVERYTHING! gahh so good :]
RenaYumi
2005-08-04
ch 1,
abuseok one thing to say here AW!! holy pants that was so flippin cute!! keep righting! a good lil fluff story can cheer anybody up.

Rena
Vic92091
2005-08-04
ch 1,
abusethat was cute... hope u and abe last long

-Vic-
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