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| wittyying 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abuseOne word...AWESOME. Thanks. |
| Lady Vinicia 2007-05-24 ch 2, | abuseWow. That's about all I can say in regards to this. It was beautifully written, and came with several unique twists that I have never seen used before... Great job! |
| Meng Yuan Sun 2007-04-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is terrible! How could Inu no Taisho be such a BASTARD!?! Frankly, I love your take that is so different from the normal Inupapa-is-great-and-everything-was-wonderful-until-he-died template. It reminds me a lot of backroom scandals that dogged the imperial courts of China, Japan and Korea. Very intricately done. |
| me 2007-02-05 ch 2, anon. | abusewell written but terribly ooc, the movies (and even manga) indicate that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's father was wise and unusually loving and that is what ultimately led to his demise. |
| harvest x moon 2006-10-29 ch 2, anon. | abusei read this yesterday, but i simply had to read it again today... this story is so heartbreaking, and it made me want to go beat up sesshoumaru's father (like i could...) and hug the little sesshoumaru... this is incredible. |
| enna 2006-10-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was absolutely heartbreaking. You portrayed the harshness of the "not-lord" well, and the nameless woman who was Sesshoumaru's mother was an easy character to pity. With a history like this, it's no wonder Sesshy's so messed up =] |
| kitsune-koinu 2006-07-23 ch 2, | abusethat was sad:( |
| ViralMancer 2006-07-14 ch 2, | abuseBeautifully written. Keep up the good work. |
| InuSaga 2005-11-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseWell, I'm not going to say anything that hasn't been said already. I think everyone is interested in who was and what happened to Sesshomaru's mother. Characterizing Inu-papa as evil was an interesting twist. Well written and well thought out, good charaterization of Sesshomaru. I'm proud to share second place in the contest with you. ~_^ |
| YamiPaladinofChaos 2005-11-13 ch 2, | abuseThe feeling of the story is this incredibly dark melancholy. Though I sometimes disagreed with the characterizations of InuPapa and Inuyasha, I'm refreshed by the different viewpoints. An excellent story. Full marks and all that. |
| nyaaaaaauuuuuuuu 2005-11-03 ch 2, | abuseThat was definitely a new perspective. I have to say I thought it was quite well done, and I liked it very much. =) |
| Tetsuni 2005-11-01 ch 2, | abuseI don't have the words to describe this fics.This is real wonderfully written.(Bows her head) |
| Oya 2005-10-25 ch 2, | abuseOh my, this was just such a splendid fic! All my vocab has left me, the only word left is BRILLIANT! |
| Caitriona 2005-10-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseI think this is a wonderful wonderful story. So many stories I have read have Sessmom being this hateful ** of a demon who makes Izayoi's life a living hell. But in this one you have given her a "humanity" that I feel has been missing from her character. You also give a rather plausible reason for Tensaiga and Tessaiga to be so different. Your explination of Sess's attitude toward his father (wanting to be greater than him), Inuyasha (his father's mistake which made his life even more difficult), and humans (one of them stole his chance to prove himself greater than his father) is wonderful, and also allows for him to have a different attitude toward Rin. A+ work! Thanks so for writing for us. Caitriona |
| MyDæmonRyusan 2005-10-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis story was very very good. I always thought of Sesshomaru's father to be nice and noble and all that stuff, to read about him not being what i expected made this story more interesting and adicting, i couldnt stop reading it. I cogradulate you on a job well done. P.S. Sorry for any misspelled words. |