wow that was the best story i have read in a long time. no kidding im in love with this story.

I ILOVED YOUR STORY. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

That was really good! I loved it! Are you going to continue it? You should!

I am hooked, at these turn of events, and if Jess will change, you have to continue

I loved it! It would have been great if that scene had been in the eppisode. Wonderful writing.

~Elisabeth~

Hey,

From the very first line of this story, you had me hooked. You have a very descriptive way of writing which I loved and the characters were the ones I remember from the show when it come to everything about them, from the looks they gave each other to the way they spoke to one and other. It has now become one of my favorite stories and as well as one of those stories that I will read over and over.

Bye, smile :-)

this seems interesting please update soon! I just hope Jess doesn't become TOO goody good, i love his bad-** self!

This would have been such a KOOL scene(s) on the show!

As your totally awesome Beta (who was TOTALLY not credited, I'm obliged to add), I'd like to say YAY for Rory and Jess! LoL... 'Tis very well-written and darkly (eh) banter-ish, dear.

Hey!
I loved this. It was so well written, the suggestion at the end was perfect...hope you continue with this because I too am looking foward to discovering how this will end :)

Your writing in this is extremely well done. Are you going to be updating this or is just a one time thing.