As expected, this story was totally great! I loved the interaction between Raditz and Nezumi in this one; he's so clueless, almost as bad as Goku, really. Naranja was a real weirdo- seems that Bardock timed his departure from hell just right. ;P The ending was awesome, lol, I bet Raditz will be quite suited to family life after he adjusts to it!

Cool story. It's a nice plot with very interesting OC's.

The ending is perfect... I love Eighteen finishing Naranja. People seem to forget that she's a capable fighter, and not a nice woman... But, she is a mother...

Very nice story. I'm enjoying reading through these.

*bursts out laughing* Way to blow a good plan there, Goten!


...Okay, so you can't blame the kid for not knowing, but still. Bad timing anyone?

*clicks next chapter*

You would think Vegeta would have learned by now not to mess with Bulma in any possible way a-tall...

...And somehow I don't think our 'friendly' noblewoman is really Saiyan (sp?).

*shrugs* Eh. I'll find out soon enough! *clicks next button*

I can't believe you have so few reviews for such an awesome story! I don't think you check your reviews often, DE, but I wanted to leave one anyway. Your portrayal of Radditz is, as always, the best I've ever read. I just love your version of him, and I am SO glad you wrote another Radditz-centered story! I had thought you'd given up on him, but as I looked today for your profile to re-read either Radditz's Return or Mythic Descent for the millionth time I saw this one. Yowza! Another fic for me to read and re-read and re-re-read. :) Your stories are always so well thought out and so well-written I don't know what I can really say. You don't forget characters, and you keep them all in character and yet none of them mess up the plot by being themselves (it's so easy to deliberately ignore a character because you know he'll demolish a particular scene you have planned). Your use of description is evocative without being overdone. Sometimes it seems like you've written yourself into a corner ("How is she going to get them out of THIS one?") but you always manage, still keeping everyone true to themselves. I wish more people wrote good Radditz fics like you do. You've made me fall in love with him, and there are so few good fics that focus on him. :)

Once again, I am bowled over my the sheer quality of your work.d This is a complete masterpiece. I wish this had gotten made onto a new season of DBZ instead of GT. If that had happened, I wouldn't have minded that it hadn't been made by Toriyama.

"You... scare ghosts?"
"Yep."

Once again, I find these small sections in your works that remind me why I love reading your stories so much.

-rurousha (formerly Angel Fox)

Another home run. I love your writing style and the way that you make Raditz a cool and tortured character. I have been reading your stories for a long time and hope to get more of them in the coming months and years. You keep writing them and I'll keep reading them.

WHOOHOO! You finally started writing again! keep up the great work.
Jimmy

Once again, a beautifully crafted story.
I'm glad Raditz and Nezumi are finally together.
I hope continuing stories will follow the growth of Zana.
Which of course means I really hope there IS a continuation of this story.

Excelent work.

hi i know you have this thing upadated a whole lot more on your website is there any new ones on it?

I cannot help but notice this story only has "Two" reviews, at least, right now.
Too sad, mostly if you think this story has a lot of things to review about and it's far better than the usual Raditz' stories around... However, I'll give my opinion when I finish to read, you know.

Hey,

Just wanted to let you know that I`m in love with your writing! I first discovered your fictions on your website and I`ve since read all of them and was very eager for your updates!

Good job, please keep writing!

Whee! First review! You already know what I think of this story, so for anyone else who hasn't read your work: READ THIS STORY! Humor, drama, a dash of horror, and of course lots of action, all tied together neatly with Dragoness' usual flair.

But it *will* make more sense if you read Raditz' Return and Mythic Descent first. It is a linked series.