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| CedarPineSpruce 2007-10-27 ch 107, | abuseSo fun. I'm looking forward to the next story. I missed Andrew and Jacob Carter. Of course, Ian crossing dimensions and visiting the other Dotty and the Ancients would be good too. Just sayin'. :-) |
| smithcrafter 2007-05-29 ch 22, | abuseOh, PLEASE tell me Ian's going to have the same kind of first camp experience that Jack did! I snickered all the way through that story! Besides, it would be so much fun to see the reactions on the faces of ALL of SG-1 when they realize the similarity! |
| spacemonkey1129 2006-10-04 ch 107, | abuseI liked the fact that Ian was being made to go work at the camp against his will,he needs to CHILLOUT!Ian needed to relize that in the airforce as in life there are things that need to be done that we may find distasteful.Ian needs to relize that when told or asked to do an on pleasant task it's best just to SUCK IT UP &DO IT !I liked the way that he acted w/Libby! |
| spacemonkey1129 2006-10-03 ch 9, | abuseI actually feel sorry for the kids !River &shawn I can see as conselors,but Ian!?!?!?!? I really don't think that Hammond would send Anyone,let alone Ian,to work at a summer camp against thier will so the could brush up on thier people skills! |
| HaniDeath 2006-07-04 ch 107, | abuseThis was good, but not in my mind as good as the orginal campers story! But then nothing can beat that! I liked Janets description of the camp being like buramad triagle! That gave me a laugh. |
| Razzbaby 2006-06-18 ch 107, | abuseSequels are definitely a challenge! I liked this one as much as the first. I loved Ian with the little boys. They were so cute. I was sort of hoping that Ian would do something like Jack did with the China boys, but I realize that Ian is a cadet not an officer of command rank. But still... Sammy was cute as were the other boys! I liked how you got Janet into the mix too! It was so good. I even liked River's escapade with Sierra. Very funny when Ian found them the night before. And Libby! I liked how Ian of course was the one to find her. Even Shawn's realizations about himself but also his vulnerability. That was empathetic. I even felt sorrier for Ian because Shawn is right about not being able to forgive himself. Even Ann trying to get into Ian's psyche was good. And with Cassie showing up! I really liked the story as much as the first Campter story! |
| Razzbaby 2006-06-18 ch 95, | abuseI thought they showed River Chulak. So he's apart of the secret. I thought that Shawn was there then because that was when he had been injured too when they recruiting Ian and River into the Trust. So they were at the SGC. I am a little confused. Sorry. But I love the camper story. I missed Shawn so I am so glad you've got him here with Ian. Very cool. |
| crazybaylorgirl 2006-01-08 ch 107, anon. | abuseI've been away for awhile but wanted to let you know that I loved the whole thing! |
| Wes Janson 2006-01-07 ch 107, anon. | abuseGood fic as usual Mel. |
| LcNessie 2005-12-28 ch 107, | abuseYey! Woohoo! *applauds* Nice job! "I heard the other guy was six" |
| kezia 2005-12-25 ch 107, anon. | abusehey, i love your stories, but have never really reviewed before, i don't really review, it's prolly a bad thing becuase i write to, but anyway, the point of this review is to say three things, one: you are an amazing writer, two: i absolutely love your stories, and three: have you ever thought about doing a River-centric story? he's just so different from everyone else, both Ian and Shawn can get broody, and River's always smiling, so, just a thought, i think it'd be cool to see what goes on in his head merry christmas...or if you don't celebrate christmas, happy holidays |
| Sci Fi Fan Gillian 2005-12-25 ch 107, | abuseExcellent ending to a very well written story. |
| Aligewe 2005-12-25 ch 107, | abuseThis was great! I can't believe it is over! but I am looking forward to the next story! as long as Ian is in it, it will be funny so... great invention of yours! The way you made him react to things around Jack and Jacob are hilarious! I can't wait to read another one that has a family reunion! (if you write one) Anyways great story! And I will enjoy the next one! Aligewe |
| Nasreen 2005-12-25 ch 107, anon. | abuseAnother fabulous campers story, can't wait for the next one (merry christmas) |
| SeedC 2005-12-25 ch 107, | abuseVery nice writing in Hammond and Ian's meeting; very authentic sounding "voices", nice plot resolution. Also enjoyed the guards' teasing re: the shiner. |