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| Slayer3 2005-12-19 ch 6, anon. | abuseSweet Manwe!*paging a certain Evenstar! HELLO ARWEN?!! you better get over there, before some Sue casts some spell on Estel and turns him OOC... Slayer, the completly obsed fangirl IMSGSET and Sue Squad member |
| idiot 2005-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseCan you flame my story? |
| ozzyiwannabeagoat 2005-11-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseTis WONDERFUL |
| Psycho Demon-Witch 2005-10-01 ch 5,  | abuseheh, this is amusing. i like it. pleae update soon! |
| emily 2005-09-30 ch 5, anon. | abusethat was awesome. and that was hilarious. hahaha. i loved it. i can't believe aragorn was there. i bet legolas will hug him and thank him that he was there. i bet he was going mad being there if he wished to go to moria. hahaha. i loved it. just update soon. |
| lady eowyn 2005-09-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseI love the story! Please, please, please hurry and add another chapter! It's clever! |
| StringynKel 2005-09-30 ch 5, | abuseAwesome! Post more soon! |
| Dryad Lady 2005-09-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseHi there I like the plot of your story very much, it is very interesting and amusing to see how Legolas would get on as a teacher. Obviously because you are quite young youre writing style is still developing and I hope you will continue to write. Without wanting to flame you in any way some of your conversations are a bit stilted. You do what all of us do at first and write down exactly what pops into your head but I think you need to go back and read over your fiction and think about other ways to express the meaning. Have a look at some sites like Henneth Anuin and the Council of Elrond which have some very good fan fiction and you might pick up some more tips. I hope this is constructive for you, above all keep writing and enjoy it - that is after all what its about. Best Wishes |
| Luthien and Tari Oronar 2005-09-30 ch 5, | abuseAh! Writer's block! Away--away from me, evil minion of Sauron! *hides beneath desk*,...is it gone? I know what you mean--I absolutely hate having writer's block. And I have it...gr. It seems like it's going to be alongterm resident this tme, so I'm just forcing myself to push through. I loved Leggie's ** thingies. That made me chuckle! Well, this time drink chocolate shakes and update soon! (Chocolate shakes do help, by the way! |
| Lady Luce 2005-09-30 ch 2, | abuseYeah this is good there are various problems with things that Legolas wouldn't know about i.e. plastic, but yeah its good. |
| Lady Luce 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuselol. OMG that's so funny, exactly what I'd do if I saw 'Legolas' or Orli in the street. |
| Slayer3 2005-09-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseSWEET ERU!!ESTEL?My Valar!umm..Wheres Arwen?*looks around..ARWEN where art thou?! uh this is soo of the not goodness...umm umm...lets see..umm...O ill help...uh..*flies off on fellbeast wearing nazgul outfit to umm..help...yeah...help*evil grin Slayer,the completly obsessed fangirl IMSGSET and Sue Squad member |
| THE Lamp Cow 2005-09-17 ch 4, anon. | abuseHi EC i was bored so i decided to write you a review shiny eh? i really like this idea for a story its cool and go tim-tams ! how is leggy? u said he has measles :( oh well please update this story soon! |
| dunan0 2005-09-08 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis...was...awesome!wow!!this is realy cool!!hope you update soon! |
| The Hobbit Lass 2005-08-07 ch 4, | abuseNot much Legolas, but still awesome. I just love stories in which the characters are in our world. They're just so amusing. |