hm.. gimme a sec to catch on and to think bout what i read...Why did he die?

hm...becuz He died for YOUR(MY) sins...

Your poem is good. :) But if the Lord didn't die then, He would have no way to forgive us our sins. By dying on the cross, He crushed Satan's head. Amen! We should not think of His death as a tragic death, but insteadan all-inclusive death! Hallelujuah! :D

wow this was great! it really gets you to think about christ and how much he love you!

I think all Xians Suck needs is kindness. He needs to know that Christians are not what he/she thinks. (for this review, let's say Xians Suck is a he). Actually, I think that once you just stop acknowledgign him he'll stop bothering you. See, I used to argue with him in my Author's Notes when I was thanking those who reviewed. Now I don't, adn he's long since stopped reviewign me, even with constructive criticism. I think if we simply show him kindness, he'll feel bad for what he's said about us and how he feels about us. He'll see that CHristians are really not what he thinks. You know that song, (i dont know if you do), "They'll Know We Are Christians By Our love"? Well, I don't think that Jesus marched around arguing with people about God. I know for a fact that He showed the people the love of God, instead of saying, "You're wrong about this and that and the other thing adn this is what's really right." Actions speak louder than words. Instead of fighting back with words, simply be kind to him, stop acknowledging that he has said anything against you at all.

That's my theory.

Anwyay, that is an awesome poem and I hope you keep writing. I was disappointed when I saw that you got no reviews, because you truly do have a talent with free verse. Keep writing! I hope to hera more from you. Email me if you'd like, I'd like to discuss more about what we should do about Xians Suck. My email (so you dont' have to go and follow the link in the email, I know it's tedious) is just like my penname.

God Bless!

Sarah