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Hedgehog Warrior
2006-10-14 . chapter 6
Update, or I'll bite your legs off!
Zukinn Chan
2006-08-04 . chapter 6
Most of this chapter was so increddibly irrelevant and random, I'm sure my brain ran away. It was still funny, though, in a randomly philosophical way.

But hurrah! A little bit of plot with the Eggman and Rouge thingo. The idea of Eggman having a Neopets account makes me laugh, LOL!. I wonder what kind of pet he would have...

Anyway, kind of confusingly spiffing chapter, yosh.
Zuki.
Phoenix of the Sea
2006-08-03 . chapter 3
Damn Knux...

Burned Knuckles: ;_;

Me: XD XD XD I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! What is 69?

All around: We'll teach you later, Eriku-kun...
Phoenix of the Sea
2006-08-03 . chapter 2
Rouge and Knuckles, sittin' in a tree! F-U-C-K-I-N-G!

Knuckles: -_-;;
Phoenix of the Sea
2006-08-03 . chapter 1
BAHAHAHA! Joey Wheeler is real!
Mecha Scorpion
2006-08-03 . chapter 6
Skimping on the jokes a bit? On the other hand, I can see this segueing (sp?) into the Eggman plot we've been waiting for for quite some time. I liked this quote.

Bleue nodded. "So to speak, it said. 'Someone dear to me just died, so to speak.' So I'm assuming that means they're dead and there's no hope of saying anyone."

Bleue's obvious statement was good, but I'm trying to figure out who would say that someone had died, so to speak. It's like saying 'I went to the dentist, per se,' or 'I turn 15 today, so to speak.'

Sonic's disgust at the dreaded m-word was pretty good, but overall, for a chapter that claimed to concern subplots, this was a good bridge back to the plot we've waited for; Eggman killing people! Update soon, from A
Zukinn Chan
2006-07-13 . chapter 5
Hur hur hur, amusingly random/pointless/weird chapter! I'd write a really long, intelligant review, but I can't, so you're stuck with this lame-a$$ review instead.
Love the SH quotes, too. Big is freaky.
Z-chan.
Mecha Scorpion
2006-07-05 . chapter 5
The funniest part of the chapter was how Amy listed Sonic's full name twice, but she just said T. instead of what it stood for. Maybe it just is T...? Rodney/Omochao was good, although I have yet to see the serial killing. This story is all over the place and full of good vocabulary, which is good. The oO thing seems more suited to script format than, well, a real story. Keep it up and keep it real til next chapter, this one was good.
Zukinn Chan
2006-06-05 . chapter 4
"“Where are you keeping it?” asked the kitsune in amazement.

“Hey! Invasion of privacy there, bub!” the azure hedgehog complained.

“Sorry.”

“Thas’okay.” Sonic said this while secretly putting Tails on his hit list."

XD That's why I totally love this fic! It's so quotable and witty- Funny, but not outrightly, OMG LOLZ! so. Hurray for Mrs. Granny Hedgehog! XD It was a subplot (Plot? What is this plot I speak of?), but it was still cool and funneh! =D Awesome chapter!
Zuki.
Tailsie
2006-06-02 . chapter 4
supremely funny
Mecha Scorpion
2006-06-02 . chapter 4
This chapter was pretty good, but I liked the Knux one better. Sonic's random responses (saying "Dontchu talk bout my mamma" when whoever it was insulted his blankie) were awesome. That one that I just used as an example is similar to something I've been wanting to use. Anyway, hopefully we'll see Eggman soon and actually figure out that he's systematically killing off the heroes.

E-mail me sometime, I don't feel like writing about the last couple of months in a review.

See ya,

Mecha Scorpz
TUL Angel
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHA!! Shadow watches Yu-gi-oh! Tee-hee.
Mecha Scorpion Lacky
2006-05-11 . chapter 3
o.o Awkward.

Write more. And if you are interisted, join the S.R.F. the Lead chairman is Mecha.
Zukinn Chan
2006-05-07 . chapter 3
Totally awesome story- very humorous, with great parodys of the characters, but not so much so that they're complete idiots.
Creepy Eggman-plot you've got going! (Although, Rouge hugging Eggman's leg is possibly more disturbing than her hugging his waist... Lucky Eggman's legs are proportionally long...)
Love the little "Our world in-jokes" too, they're very cute and funny.

Anyway, I'll watch this story, it definately has a promising start! X3
Zuki.
Mecha Scorpion
2006-03-14 . chapter 3
I'm reviewing as I'm going along in the story... "uproariously" only really applies to speaking. Chins cannot bounce uproariously. Anyway, the dance number did not really work very well, but at least you inserted some jokes. Remember, music and dance is not inherently funny, not even if an unusual character is doing it- you have to work at it. Seinfeld's inclusion was good. I might have given Knuckles a few more comments, though. Eggman's reaction after he'd interrupted (you're saying the reason my plan can't fail is you can imitate Michael Jackson?) was priceless, as well as his "abnormally large hips." Funny.

Anyway, so much for an explicit chapter. There was no death, and as I recall no explicit lyrics. I did catch the innuendo, though (innuendo sounds vaguely like the word Nintendo). It was great of you to update this. Please continue. You have quite the way with random humor. This is the kind of stuff I haven't written for a while, but wanted to.
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