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| Sesshomaru is Fluffy Evil 2008-02-10 ch 2,  | abusei like it. please update soon or I WILL DIE! |
| xladykittyx 2007-07-10 ch 2, | abusegreat story! |
| SammehIsTehSecks 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abuseOoh I like, update soon! |
| SammehIsTehSecks 2006-12-28 ch 2, | abuseCute! |
| anonnie mouse 2006-09-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseWOW! This is one of the most confusing ball scenes I've EVER SCENE!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.! PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.! I wonder who Kikyo's donor is? When will Sess and Kag end up together!?!?!?!?!?*cry* PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY VERY SOON!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.! |
| mirokunsango4e 2006-08-07 ch 2, | abuseHey I love your story keep up the good work and update soon |
| Kimster44 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abuseHahaha foot in the mouth struck hard |
| Neko-Lady 2006-06-17 ch 2, | abuseWell, I can finally comment on a story in progress, okay that's not true, I sent a review of 'By the Book'. You really do like short chapters don't you? Does that mean you update frequently? Hope so! This story certainly could get interesting/confusing very quickly. Your writing is well done, good grammar and spelling. (These are important things to me, it is VERY irritating when the narative is interupted because of errors.) The one area I could wish for improvement would be your limes. Just a tiny bit more detail and they would be lovely lemons! (Too much detail is as bad as not enough!) Keep writing and I promise to keep reviewing! 'Cross my heart, slap me dead, stick a lobster on my head!' (If you know where I got that quote from I will be impressed and amazed!) |
| Kriss Tenshi 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseplzz write more son! |
| kagome-sess 2006-03-19 ch 2, | abusei love it plz update! |
| MysticalElf 2006-02-24 ch 2, | abusePLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! |
| Kimster44 2006-02-24 ch 2, | abusehow the heck can you just end a story like thats that god update |
| Sesshomaru's wildfire 2006-02-22 ch 2, | abuseO I love it it is so going on my top five I love It update son Love ya CJ RINI |
| Natsumi Salias 2006-02-08 ch 2, | abuseoh **! kikyou is in trouble. now... do kikyou and kagome really look that much alike? danm! update soon so i can read more! |
| Mysticalflame 2006-01-02 ch 2, | abuseOh! Oh! *Cackle, wheeze* That's hilarious! Oh, goodness. I just love cases like these, misunderstandings galore! Oh, boy. Anyway, update soon! ^^ |