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Reviews For: Strength

saturn567
2006-09-01
ch 1,
abusebeautiful!
i-luv-24
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abusev.good, i liked it
dealan
2005-08-11
ch 1,
abuseExcellent work here. Short but it shows so much of the pain and happiness that would come from the trauma of S2. The aftermath you've captured here is rarely touched upon let alone handled as well as you have done here.
Jules27nd
2005-08-08
ch 1,
abuseNice job with this! As with the other reviewers, I really enjoyed the lack of dialogue. As someone who tends to get bogged down in words, the lack of talking was refreshing. And the use of the present tense was nice -- I recently wrote a story using the present tense and now I can't stop because I find it really adds something.
doikea
2005-08-06
ch 1, anon.
abusetrue to "emotional Michelle"...recalling THE KISS IN THE CORNER.
Amy
2005-08-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseI thought you did a good job with this. You actually described it better than most. Not necessarily with details but, with explanation. So yes, I liked it. I hope you keep writing!
ourania211
2005-08-05
ch 1,
abusevery nice, i like your style of writing. i love the way your portray the emotions going on in the aftermath of S2, because that is exactly how i saw things playing out.
tm24
2005-08-05
ch 1,
abuseGreat story! I loved it! I really hope that you write another story soon!
MBooker
2005-08-05
ch 1,
abuseNice and I agree with bookworm... You did a great job without using any dialouge.
Heather McFey
2005-08-05
ch 1,
abuseoh I love how you wrote this, its an unusual style that works really well. Its not bogged down in complex trains of thought or dialogue. i look forward to reading more of your stuff :D
freelancer-babe
2005-08-05
ch 1, anon.
abusenot bad, touching
bookworm03
2005-08-04
ch 1,
abuseThat was nice. I liked the lack of dialogue for a change. Good job.
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